Corrections for Chapter 6 (Section 7)lomond wrote: ↑January 19th, 2020, 9:31 pmGreetings -KevinS wrote: ↑January 18th, 2020, 11:55 amCh. 7
This is, indeed, going to be an interesting book. I can't wait to show the girls in my Pathfinder Club the attire worn by the girls in the book.
Notes on Section 7:
This is actually Chapter 6 instead of Chapter 7. At the very beginning and, again, at the end, this is identified as Chapter 7.
TIME: 01:29 TEXT: " As a guest in the wild,". Reading has this phrase repeated.
TIME: 06:16 TEXT: "more properly, the ruffed grouse." Reading has ruffled instead of ruffed.
TIME: 07:00 TEXT: "Stalking the Ruffed Grouse" Reading has this phrase repeated.
Otherwise, PL OK.
I enjoyed your reading of the calls of some of the birds, especially that of the ruffed grouse.
I'm embarrassed I let this go for so long. Apologies to all.