ToddHW wrote: ↑April 2nd, 2020, 9:23 am
Most of Act 1 is ready for PL; I'll finish the cast list when the last files are completed.
over one hour ! I didn't finish this yesterday night but this morning. It sounds really great, already the whole drama is unfolding. A strong opening act.
Everbody excellent.
Here a few notes, mainly for the stage directions, but I am guessing you left them out for a reason. With most of them I agree anyway, and I guess those three are also optional. Just mentioning them in case it was an oversight and you can decide.
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at 1:12: just to remember where to put in the missing voice credits:
loud voice and
voice (still waiting for them). On the other hand,
Dame,
Woman's voice,
Man's voice and
Child are also missing and we already have those ready
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at 11:23: missed part: "
Christiana goes to left"
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at 40:22: missed part "
Kate gets L., behind table"
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at 59:25: "
Eric, laughingly" can get
cut, Larry says it laughingly enough
thanks, great job !
Sonia
You slay me, tough guy! You've hit on all sixes there. You really know your onions! 
And the way you interspersed Devorah's lovely singing into the dialogue sounds excellent. I really felt like watching it all on stage. Our emotions are all very dramatically enhanced here. It's a great play and craftily assembled.
but PL ok now, thank you so much Linda !!
