COMPLETE[PLAY]The Squire by Arthur Wing Pinero - thw

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » February 24th, 2020, 12:29 pm

Christiana Act 3... Hope all the lines are there.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/squire_christianahaggerston_3_128kb.mp3 4:58

Post by **ToddHW** » February 24th, 2020, 1:19 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » February 25th, 2020, 12:58 am

Ealswythe wrote: ↑February 24th, 2020, 12:29 pmChristiana Act 3... Hope all the lines are there.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/squire_christianahaggerston_3_128kb.mp3 4:58

ah now she shows her true colours. She can be quite fierce that one. Excellently characterized, a a good deal of venom in your voice

Only one small bit missing, right at the end:

> at 4:48: "Your servant, lieutenant" - I think you may have cut out the beginning by mistake maybe ?

Thanks !!!

Sonia

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » February 25th, 2020, 8:54 am

Kitty wrote: ↑February 25th, 2020, 12:58 am
Ealswythe wrote: ↑February 24th, 2020, 12:29 pmChristiana Act 3... Hope all the lines are there.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/squire_christianahaggerston_3_128kb.mp3 4:58

ah now she shows her true colours. She can be quite fierce that one. Excellently characterized, a a good deal of venom in your voice

Only one small bit missing, right at the end:

> at 4:48: "Your servant, lieutenant" - I think you may have cut out the beginning by mistake maybe ?

Thanks !!!

Sonia

I’ll insert that bit today, Sonia. Thank you!

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » February 25th, 2020, 2:13 pm

Hi Sonia! Here's Act 3, with missing line:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/squire_christianahaggerston_3_128kb.mp3 4:58

Post by **ToddHW** » February 25th, 2020, 2:29 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » February 25th, 2020, 3:04 pm

Missing an early act 1 line for Christiana, buried in stage directions:

(L. C.—putting her arms round his neck) I haven't
seen you for nearly a week, brother dear.

And another Christiana line poorly marked:

Chris, (looking round) Wait here and I'll bring
you a drink, (she crosses to L.)

Separate small file would be fine.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » February 26th, 2020, 1:12 am

ToddHW wrote:Missing an early act 1 line for Christiana, buried in stage directions:

I'm angry with myself for having missed so many, sorry, Todd

Ealswythe wrote:Here's Act 3, with missing line:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/squire_christianahaggerston_3_128kb.mp3 4:58

thank you, Linda, this one is PL ok now (I hope I haven't missed anything here

)

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » February 26th, 2020, 7:24 am

The Gutenberg formatting is really not their best. I like their transcriptions because you can more easily search for lines - if they are marked correctly - but maybe I should use Archive.org scanned script files for the future less well known Pineros....

Thanks, Todd

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » February 26th, 2020, 10:37 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑February 26th, 2020, 7:24 am The Gutenberg formatting is really not their best. I like their transcriptions because you can more easily search for lines - if they are marked correctly - but maybe I should use Archive.org scanned script files for the future less well known Pineros....

Thanks, Todd

Having received a Master of Fine Arts in Screenwriting, I found their jumbled and haphazard format of writing a script appalling. It actually gave me headaches to even look at it. Definitely, it diminished my ability to decipher the script - when a character was speaking, what were the stage directions, etc. It was hit and miss, for the most part.

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » February 26th, 2020, 10:44 am

Christiana Missing lines for Todd:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/christiana_lines_128kb.mp3

00:14

Post by **Kitty** » February 26th, 2020, 11:07 am

Ealswythe wrote: ↑February 26th, 2020, 10:44 am Christiana Missing lines for Todd:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/christiana_lines_128kb.mp3 00:14

thank you again, and sorry for the oversight the first time around. PL ok now.

Stick around in case Todd finds more missing lines in Acts 2 and 3

Sonia

Ealswythe · Post by **Ealswythe** » February 26th, 2020, 1:04 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑February 26th, 2020, 11:07 am
Ealswythe wrote: ↑February 26th, 2020, 10:44 am Christiana Missing lines for Todd:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/christiana_lines_128kb.mp3 00:14
thank you again, and sorry for the oversight the first time around. PL ok now.

Stick around in case Todd finds more missing lines in Acts 2 and 3

Sonia

Yes, I'll keep checking the replies, because there may very well be more missing lines. It was good too that he sent me a private message about it, because I caught it right away.

DanielHCrump · Post by **DanielHCrump** » February 28th, 2020, 2:57 pm

Hello!

Can I claim section 1 please?

Post by **ToddHW** » February 28th, 2020, 4:39 pm

Thank you.

Todd