COMPLETE[PLAY]Heautontimorumenos; the Self-Tormentor by Terence - thw

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Post by Kitty » January 2nd, 2020, 6:57 am

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January 1st, 2020, 1:06 pm
OK, I didn't know the translator was needed at the end as well. Added now anyway, and re-uploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_narrator_5_128kb.mp3
thank you, yes, now PL ok :)

you probably never have to say heautontimorumenos in your life again :lol: it's not the sort of vocabulary that commonly crops up in discussions :mrgreen: but you never know when one might need it

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Post by ToddHW » January 4th, 2020, 8:08 am

Act 2, you mean....

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Post by Kitty » January 4th, 2020, 10:22 am

yes great job, Larry :clap: I am not sure yet whether Syrus is a totally positive character or more a nasty schemer. And you keep it nicely ambiguous too, I like that. We'll see how he turns out.

I only found one small thing to correct:

> at 8:14: "But hark you, take care, will you, not to be imprudently impetuous." - you say "will you not, to be" but it is "will you, not to be", which is exactly the opposite. You need to make the break at the correct comma placing

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Post by silverquill » January 7th, 2020, 11:05 pm

Kitty wrote:
January 4th, 2020, 10:22 am
yes great job, Larry :clap: I am not sure yet whether Syrus is a totally positive character or more a nasty schemer. And you keep it nicely ambiguous too, I like that. We'll see how he turns out.

I only found one small thing to correct:

> at 8:14: "But hark you, take care, will you, not to be imprudently impetuous." - you say "will you not, to be" but it is "will you, not to be", which is exactly the opposite. You need to make the break at the correct comma placing

thanks

Sonia
Aaah. We'll, I had to go over this several times to make sense of it. Somehow wasn't registering with me. Maybe the little grey cells were just worn out. But, i think I've got it right now. Very excellent to spot this. So, let's try this:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_2_128kb.mp3

I have the rest of the acts recorded, so it's "just" a matter of editing them now.

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Post by Kitty » January 8th, 2020, 1:31 am

silverquill wrote:
January 7th, 2020, 11:05 pm
Aaah. We'll, I had to go over this several times to make sense of it. Somehow wasn't registering with me. Maybe the little grey cells were just worn out. But, i think I've got it right now. Very excellent to spot this.
well, spotting such things is what makes gives the DPL job a meaning :mrgreen:

And you got it perfectly right this time. :thumbs: PL ok now. Thank you, Larry !

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Post by ToddHW » January 13th, 2020, 12:26 pm

Thank you.

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Post by Kitty » January 14th, 2020, 3:58 am

silverquill wrote:
January 13th, 2020, 10:26 am
Here are Acts 3, 4 and 5 of Syrus -- money, money, money
excellent, Larry. Great job here with this little schemer, who in the end doesn't seem to have the upper hand after all :lol:

Acts 3 and 4 are already PL ok.

One small note left for Act 5:

> at 0:26: "that that in which I have offended" – you say "I have been offended", which is the opposite

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Post by silverquill » January 14th, 2020, 8:35 am

Kitty wrote:
January 14th, 2020, 3:58 am

One small note left for Act 5:

> at 0:26: "that that in which I have offended" – you say "I have been offended", which is the opposite

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Did a clip, but if you think it needs a new recording, just let me know.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_5_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kitty » January 15th, 2020, 2:47 am

silverquill wrote:
January 14th, 2020, 8:35 am
Did a clip, but if you think it needs a new recording, just let me know.
it sounds alright and is understandable :thumbs: we can leave it like that. Thanks, it's PL ok then

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Post by ToddHW » January 24th, 2020, 12:24 pm

I have assembled the five acts except for the two missing roles.

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Post by WiltedScribe » February 6th, 2020, 12:51 pm

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Post by ToddHW » February 6th, 2020, 1:29 pm

Okay.

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