Complete [Short Stories]At a Winter's Fire by Bernard Capes-ag

[linny]

I can PL 10.

[JoeS]

Here is section 5 Amy.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_05_capes_128kb.mp3

Length is 14:41

Let me know of any corrections needed.

Hi Joe,
Section 5 is PL OK. That one had some chilling imagery!
Thank you!
Amy

Yes it did Amy, and at the same time it had me laughing out loud on a couple of occasions.

[linny]

And section 10:

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_10_capes_128kb.mp3

Length: 30:31

Great reading!

Just a couple of edits for you.
-19:31 slight stumble - yet F—— was a swindling rogue,

-25:36 stumble - I had staggered back with that cry in my throat, when I felt fingers like iron clamps close on my arm and hold it. The grip, more than the face I turned to look upon in my surging terror, was forcibly human.

[alg1001]

Thank you for proof listening it, Linny! I will update the MW with your PL notes.
Happy New Year!

[linny]

I'm glad to help out...finally. You've been pretty quick.

[LightBrownPillow]

I've got my recording of section 8 ready to go: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_08_capes_128kb.mp3
Legnth is 33:02.

This is my first prose recording, so any feedback on technique/general style (in addition to pointing out errors) is much appreciated! Please also pardon my wandering attempt at a French accent

Thanks,
Matt

[linny]

Amy,
I can pl section 8 tomorrow if you don’t have time tonight.

[alg1001]

Thank you, Linny! That would be great. I'll give you MW access.

[alg1001]

I've got my recording of section 8 ready to go: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_08_capes_128kb.mp3
Legnth is 33:02.

This is my first prose recording, so any feedback on technique/general style (in addition to pointing out errors) is much appreciated! Please also pardon my wandering attempt at a French accent

Thanks,
Matt

Hi Matt,
It is nice to have your first prose recording in this.
Thank your for Section 8!
-Amy

[linny]

I've got my recording of section 8 ready to go: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_08_capes_128kb.mp3
Legnth is 33:02.

This is my first prose recording, so any feedback on technique/general style (in addition to pointing out errors) is much appreciated! Please also pardon my wandering attempt at a French accent

Thanks,
Matt

Hello Matt,
You did a great job. I enjoyed the 'wandering attempt at a French accent'. It brought a lot to the reading.

One little blip you may be able to edit out.

5:31 - Slight stumble - to the undercliff of soft blue lias and the very roof ridges of King's Cobb

[LightBrownPillow]

I've got my recording of section 8 ready to go: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_08_capes_128kb.mp3
Legnth is 33:02.

This is my first prose recording, so any feedback on technique/general style (in addition to pointing out errors) is much appreciated! Please also pardon my wandering attempt at a French accent

Thanks,
Matt

Hello Matt,
You did a great job. I enjoyed the 'wandering attempt at a French accent'. It brought a lot to the reading.

One little blip you may be able to edit out.

5:31 - Slight stumble - to the undercliff of soft blue lias and the very roof ridges of King's Cobb

Thanks for the feedback Linny. Got the updated file here: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_08_capes_128kb.mp3

I edited out the stumble, and I think it's passable, but let me know if it would be better to just re-record that sentence (hard to get the same exact reading speed/tone so wanted to work with what's there first).

Also, Amy, please list me as Matt Tantillo in the final posting of the finished project.

Thanks!

[alg1001]

I updated your catalog name, Matt. Thank you for the updated file.
Cheers!
Amy

[linny]

Nice editing job, Matt. Section 8 is spot check PL OK.

[drwebber]

I put you in for Jack and Jill now. I knew I was forgetting something. It happens so infrequently.
Thanks!
-Amy

Section 3 "Jack and Jill" uploaded as https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wintersfire_03_capes_128kb.mp3
Length 28:26

[alg1001]

Thank you, Dr. Webber!