COMPLETE [FICTION] A Red Wallflower by Susan Warner-ag

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Post by HannahMary » October 22nd, 2019, 12:01 pm

Thank you! Though I am only BC and not DPL on this project, I listened to section 12 so I could assure you that it is more than "decent." In fact your recording is clear and enjoyable!

I have not run the technical checks, but there is just one PL note from listening that another listener may not catch. I am familiar with this book, so I noticed that the opposite meaning came across at one point when two words were changed around.

At 12:50 you read, "She was NOT like a little sister." Instead the book reads, "Was she not like a little sister?" Meaning that he thought of her as a little sister at that point, which is quite important in interpreting his actions. Do you mind fixing that one sentence and resubmitting this chapter?
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Post by RSlabaugh » October 22nd, 2019, 12:15 pm

HannahMary wrote:
October 22nd, 2019, 12:01 pm
Thank you! Though I am only BC and not DPL on this project, I listened to section 12 so I could assure you that it is more than "decent." In fact your recording is clear and enjoyable!

I have not run the technical checks, but there is just one PL note from listening that another listener may not catch. I am familiar with this book, so I noticed that the opposite meaning came across at one point when two words were changed around.

At 12:50 you read, "She was NOT like a little sister." Instead the book reads, "Was she not like a little sister?" Meaning that he thought of her as a little sister at that point, which is quite important in interpreting his actions. Do you mind fixing that one sentence and resubmitting this chapter?
I did run them both through checker but haven't had time to PL either of them. Technical side looks great! Hannah, I'm great with you taking PL responsibility for 12. Your note on the "decency" makes me eager to listen to 17. :thumbs:
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Post by RSlabaugh » October 22nd, 2019, 4:39 pm

jenno wrote:
October 21st, 2019, 6:04 pm
Here is chapter 7

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_07_warner_128kb.mp3

duration 24.54

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PL OK :clap:

Will you take more? *with a hopeful look* I've enjoyed listening to you!
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Post by jenno » October 22nd, 2019, 4:49 pm

I would love to. It is an easy and interesting book to read.

However I am going to be off the air for about 10 days due to a trip to hospital. I hope to be up and ready by about the 8th November. So when I get home, if there are still chapters to be recorded I will take them with enthusiasm.

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Post by RSlabaugh » October 22nd, 2019, 5:02 pm

Section 17 is PL OK :clap: Great job!
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Post by shashankjakhmola » October 22nd, 2019, 9:36 pm

HannahMary wrote:
October 22nd, 2019, 12:01 pm
Thank you! Though I am only BC and not DPL on this project, I listened to section 12 so I could assure you that it is more than "decent." In fact your recording is clear and enjoyable!

I have not run the technical checks, but there is just one PL note from listening that another listener may not catch. I am familiar with this book, so I noticed that the opposite meaning came across at one point when two words were changed around.

At 12:50 you read, "She was NOT like a little sister." Instead the book reads, "Was she not like a little sister?" Meaning that he thought of her as a little sister at that point, which is quite important in interpreting his actions. Do you mind fixing that one sentence and resubmitting this chapter?
check this one out. 12 @ 16:35 (made revisions) - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_12_warner_128kb.mp3
Last edited by shashankjakhmola on October 24th, 2019, 2:46 am, edited 1 time in total.


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Post by shashankjakhmola » October 24th, 2019, 2:45 am

Was meant to record XXVII, but mistakenly ended up recording XXXVII (Thankfully realised it at the last moment).

Anyways, consider this a surprise gift. :lol: :P

37 @ 20.1 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_37_warner_128kb.mp3

-

Here I ended recording the XXVII (damn this was tricky) -
27 @ 13.08 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_27_warner_128kb.mp3

28 @ 12.54 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_28_warner_128kb.mp3

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Post by HannahMary » October 24th, 2019, 5:33 pm

shashankjakhmola wrote:
October 22nd, 2019, 9:36 pm
check this one out. 12 @ 16:35 (made revisions) - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_12_warner_128kb.mp3
Section 12 is PL OK. Thanks for the revision!
~ Hannah
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Post by HannahMary » October 24th, 2019, 5:34 pm

Thanks for all of your recordings - including the surprise! :lol:
~ Hannah
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so that you may overflow with hope by the power of the Holy Spirit."
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Post by RSlabaugh » October 26th, 2019, 2:08 pm

~Rosebud

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Post by RSlabaugh » October 26th, 2019, 2:15 pm

shashankjakhmola wrote:
October 24th, 2019, 2:45 am
Was meant to record XXVII, but mistakenly ended up recording XXXVII (Thankfully realised it at the last moment).

Anyways, consider this a surprise gift. :lol: :P

37 @ 20.1 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_37_warner_128kb.mp3

-

Here I ended recording the XXVII (this was tricky) -
27 @ 13.08 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_27_warner_128kb.mp3

28 @ 12.54 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_28_warner_128kb.mp3
Section 27 PL notes:
~8:34-37 overlong silence
~11:24-27 overlong silence
Volume is at 86.6 dB which is in the target range, but could use an amplification of 2 to match the rest better.

Section 28: PL OK :thumbs:

Section 37 PL notes:
~16:08-11 overlong silence

Good work on these! I enjoyed the listen :)
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Post by shashankjakhmola » October 26th, 2019, 11:43 pm

RSlabaugh wrote:
October 26th, 2019, 2:15 pm
shashankjakhmola wrote:
October 24th, 2019, 2:45 am
Was meant to record XXVII, but mistakenly ended up recording XXXVII (Thankfully realised it at the last moment).

Anyways, consider this a surprise gift. :lol: :P

37 @ 20.1 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_37_warner_128kb.mp3

-

Here I ended recording the XXVII (this was tricky) -
27 @ 13.08 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_27_warner_128kb.mp3

28 @ 12.54 - https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_28_warner_128kb.mp3
Section 27 PL notes:
~8:34-37 overlong silence
~11:24-27 overlong silence
Volume is at 86.6 dB which is in the target range, but could use an amplification of 2 to match the rest better.

Section 28: PL OK :thumbs:

Section 37 PL notes:
~16:08-11 overlong silence

Good work on these! I enjoyed the listen :)
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_27_warner_128kb.mp3 - 13.03

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/redwallflower_37_warner_128kb.mp3 - 19.59

Solved the problems.

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Post by RSlabaugh » October 27th, 2019, 5:35 am

Thanks! I’ll try to get to these this afternoon.
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