COMPLETE SOLO Journal of Rev. Francis Asbury, Vol. II-mas

Post by **mightyfelix** » October 30th, 2019, 6:17 pm

8 PL ok!

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » November 3rd, 2019, 3:49 pm

Section 9 ready for PL.

Post by **mightyfelix** » November 3rd, 2019, 8:44 pm

northstar95 wrote: ↑November 3rd, 2019, 3:49 pm Section 9 ready for PL.

PL ok!

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » November 10th, 2019, 3:29 pm

Thanks! 10 is up!

Post by **mightyfelix** » November 10th, 2019, 5:21 pm

Nice job, Brian! A few notes/suggestions on this one.

OPTIONAL pronunciation note at around 3:06. "Episcopacy" should be stressed on the second syllable, thus. You may choose to correct it, or leave it.
At 6:04, I'm not sure if it is my ears playing tricks on me or not, but I hear "A daughter of my old friend, Stedham, had not forgotten." It should be "A daughter of my old friend, Stedham, had not forgotten me." Have a listen, and see what you think?
22:16 Another spot where it might just be my ears. It sounds to me like there is a missing syllable. I hear "...we had a right to mange the temporal concerns..." It should be "...we had a right to manage the temporal concerns..."

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » November 12th, 2019, 6:14 pm

mightyfelix wrote: ↑November 10th, 2019, 5:21 pm Nice job, Brian! A few notes/suggestions on this one.

OPTIONAL pronunciation note at around 3:06. "Episcopacy" should be stressed on the second syllable, thus. You may choose to correct it, or leave it.
At 6:04, I'm not sure if it is my ears playing tricks on me or not, but I hear "A daughter of my old friend, Stedham, had not forgotten." It should be "A daughter of my old friend, Stedham, had not forgotten me." Have a listen, and see what you think?
22:16 Another spot where it might just be my ears. It sounds to me like there is a missing syllable. I hear "...we had a right to mange the temporal concerns..." It should be "...we had a right to manage the temporal concerns..."

Thanks for the feedback! I have re-upped this section.

Post by **mightyfelix** » November 14th, 2019, 2:56 pm

northstar95 wrote: ↑November 12th, 2019, 6:14 pm
mightyfelix wrote: ↑November 10th, 2019, 5:21 pm Nice job, Brian! A few notes/suggestions on this one.

OPTIONAL pronunciation note at around 3:06. "Episcopacy" should be stressed on the second syllable, thus. You may choose to correct it, or leave it.
At 6:04, I'm not sure if it is my ears playing tricks on me or not, but I hear "A daughter of my old friend, Stedham, had not forgotten." It should be "A daughter of my old friend, Stedham, had not forgotten me." Have a listen, and see what you think?
22:16 Another spot where it might just be my ears. It sounds to me like there is a missing syllable. I hear "...we had a right to mange the temporal concerns..." It should be "...we had a right to manage the temporal concerns..."
Thanks for the feedback! I have re-upped this section.

Beautifully corrected. Spot PL ok.

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » November 17th, 2019, 2:34 pm

Section 11 is ready for PL.

Post by **mightyfelix** » November 21st, 2019, 5:34 pm

11 PL ok!

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » November 24th, 2019, 4:37 pm

Section 12 is ready for PL.

Post by **mightyfelix** » November 27th, 2019, 8:14 pm

12 PL ok.

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » December 1st, 2019, 6:17 pm

Section 13 is ready for PL.
It was especially interesting to hear him comment on the Salem witch trials.

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » December 4th, 2019, 1:55 pm

14 is uploaded also.

Post by **mightyfelix** » December 5th, 2019, 4:45 pm

13 and 14 PL ok.

northstar95 · Post by **northstar95** » December 8th, 2019, 4:28 pm

Section 15 is ready for PL.