COMPLETE [SOLO] Otherworld: Cadences by F.S. Flint-ag

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 1:49 pm

sect 16, 19
PL OK
Beautiful.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 1:56 pm

sect 17 & 18
PL OK

Incredible, life thru the eyes of a tree.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 2:12 pm

sect 20
PL OK

Deja Vu, that scene was just in a movie I watched. (Ended in murder.)

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 2:22 pm

sect 21
PL OK

A voice or a touch, spine-chilling.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 2:31 pm

sect 22 & 24
PL OK

❤

Luv it, luv it!

The world outside my window.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 2:55 pm

sect 23
PL OK

I was alright, until you got to the monster behind the table.

Yes, I did quickly give a side glance (eyebrows up) in the direction of my dinning room table.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 3:04 pm

sect 25
PL OK

I have a love-hate relationship whenever he does that; I never see it coming.

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » October 13th, 2019, 3:17 pm

Oh Helen, you are just the best!!!!

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 13th, 2019, 4:23 pm

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » October 13th, 2019, 8:32 pm

Sections 26,27,28 are up for PL Helen, the war poems start.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » October 16th, 2019, 6:31 pm

sect 26-28
PL OK

Only one comment: soulful.

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » November 1st, 2019, 7:46 pm

Hi Helen!!!

Sections 30 and 31 are up for PL,

Thank you!

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » November 3rd, 2019, 1:17 pm

Hi Nemo,
sect 30
PL OK

Incredible, I could see and feel everything.
The tone of your voice was just perfect.

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » November 3rd, 2019, 1:31 pm

sect 31
PL OK

Astonishing transitioning from one scene to the other.

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » November 3rd, 2019, 1:35 pm

Thank you Helen!