[COMPLETE] Ann by Lechmere Worrall - dlo

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RHelfmann
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Post by RHelfmann » February 3rd, 2020, 10:33 pm

Hello, I just recently joined this community and noticed the Orphan tag for this project.

I'd love to give Billy a shot, i'll try to record within the week. This will be my first time contributing to a project on LibriVox so any criticism/notes will really be appreciated!

Thanks,
Richard
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Post by dlolso21 » February 4th, 2020, 4:44 am

RHelfmann wrote:
February 3rd, 2020, 10:33 pm
Hello, I just recently joined this community and noticed the Orphan tag for this project.

I'd love to give Billy a shot, i'll try to record within the week. This will be my first time contributing to a project on LibriVox so any criticism/notes will really be appreciated!

Thanks,
Richard
Richard,

Thank you for volunteering. If you have any questions, please ask.

Please do a one minute test to check your technical settings.

I have updated the MW (Magic Window in the first post) to show your claim. I have also created your reader page ( https://librivox.org/reader/13886 ) which shows your Forum name and Catalog name; the Catalog name is the one that displays on the Librivox catalog pages and can the same as your forum name ( such as Linny's https://librivox.org/reader/5796 ) or it can be different from your forum name ( such as mine https://librivox.org/reader/6065 ).

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Post by RHelfmann » February 8th, 2020, 5:01 pm

Hello,
Just uploaded my Billy for the first act
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_billylloyd_1_128kb.mp3.mp3
02:41

Let me know how this sounds so I know if I should continue with my set up or rerecord with something new

Thanks!
Richard
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Post by linny » February 9th, 2020, 8:09 am

RHelfmann wrote:
February 8th, 2020, 5:01 pm
Hello,
Just uploaded my Billy for the first act
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_billylloyd_1_128kb.mp3.mp3
02:41

Let me know how this sounds so I know if I should continue with my set up or rerecord with something new

Thanks!
Richard
Hello Richard,
Two corrections for this act.

0:29 missing line: An American interviewer, Mrs. Hargraves; awfully keen on Edward.

2:20 word change – I say, Mr. Hargraves, I don’t want to hurry you, but if we’re going slumming, oughtn’t we to be off?

For future acts, I don't need the LV intro or ending. I only need "Billy, read by----".

Please leave closer to 5 seconds between lines. It makes editing much easier.

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Post by RHelfmann » February 20th, 2020, 7:55 pm

Redid the first act:
03:02
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_billylloyd_1_128kb.2_.mp3

Also gave a reading for act 2:
04:31
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_billylloyd_2_128kb.mp3

gonna post act 3 shortly
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Post by RHelfmann » February 20th, 2020, 8:30 pm

Got Act 3:
02:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_billylloyd_3_128kb.mp3

Let me know if there are any corrections or fixes you'd like!

Really excited to see this all come together :)
Cheers,
Eddy Elfman

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Post by linny » February 21st, 2020, 9:45 am

RHelfmann wrote:
February 20th, 2020, 8:30 pm
Let me know if there are any corrections or fixes you'd like!

Really excited to see this all come together :)
Almost perfect! You just missed a couple of lines in Act 2.

Act 1 is spot check PL OK.

Act 2
3:35 missing lines p.47 -49– Oh! Now we’re all merry and bright! Now perhaps Edward’ll be able to write about women.

Hallo, who’s been leaving their slippers about?

Yes, aren’t they?

Act 3 is PL OK.

*For future dramatic work please do leave ~5 seconds between lines (even stage directions). Less of a break complicates and adds to the editing time.

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Post by RHelfmann » February 28th, 2020, 7:12 pm

Cheers,
Eddy Elfman

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Post by linny » February 29th, 2020, 12:40 pm

Billy Lloyd is PL OK. :clap: Thank you for your help.

When posting a revision at LibriVox please maintain the original filename.

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Post by linny » February 29th, 2020, 12:44 pm

dlolso21 wrote:
January 28th, 2020, 11:48 pm
linny wrote:
January 28th, 2020, 3:10 pm
David if you would like I can DPL the last of the parts and do the editing.

When the time comes do you want to do the final PL or should I advertise when I post Act 1?
Libby,

That would be awesome! Thank You.

I can PL the final acts.

David O
David,
These acts are really long. I don't have the endurance to start editing today but at least I don't have to wonder what I'll be doing this weekend. :wink:

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Post by linny » March 1st, 2020, 3:18 pm

Not all of the acts are as long as I originally thought. Lots of short edits though. My hand is starting to cramp so this is the only one today.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_2_worrall_128kb.mp3 35:58

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Post by dlolso21 » March 1st, 2020, 11:41 pm

linny wrote:
March 1st, 2020, 3:18 pm
Not all of the acts are as long as I originally thought. Lots of short edits though. My hand is starting to cramp so this is the only one today.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_2_worrall_128kb.mp3 35:58
Linny,

Thank you.

Act 2 is PL OK.

Sorry about the sore hand,
David O

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Post by linny » March 2nd, 2020, 7:22 am

dlolso21 wrote:
March 1st, 2020, 11:41 pm
Sorry about the sore hand,
David O
Thank you for the PL. It seems that all my editing projects are ready at the same time. :lol:

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Post by linny » March 2nd, 2020, 11:52 am

Act 1 is more than half way edited (draft uploaded for safekeeping). I have errands to run this afternoon so I likely won't finish until tomorrow.

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Post by linny » March 3rd, 2020, 12:12 pm

Act 1 is ready for PL. https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_1_worrall_128kb.mp3 48:02 (MW updated)

There are two missing lines but I edited as though we would do without them.

3:11 - Edward - "Bother!"

4:33 - Billy - "You don't know anything about women."

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