COMPLETE Prince or Chauffeur? A Story of Newport by Lawrence Perry - dc

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Post by SaraHale » August 21st, 2019, 8:55 am

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August 21st, 2019, 8:53 am
Thanks, Sara. :D
You're welcome. :D

Have a nice day/evening.
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Post by neecheelok70 » August 24th, 2019, 8:28 am

Here is 18. I prefer creepy, not silky, for Koltsoff. :lol:

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Post by neecheelok70 » August 26th, 2019, 9:51 am

Here is Section 19. :)

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Post by SaraHale » August 26th, 2019, 11:07 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
August 24th, 2019, 8:28 am
Here is 18. I prefer creepy, not silky, for Koltsoff. :lol:
I second that!!! :lol:

Very Minor PL Note:
@09m:47.491s - such as we. Our success depends upon it, alone.
A little silence would be better between the above sentences. What do you think?
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Post by SaraHale » August 26th, 2019, 11:11 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
August 26th, 2019, 9:51 am
Here is Section 19. :)
PL OK :clap: Good job with the narration. 7 more chapters to go. :D
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Post by neecheelok70 » August 27th, 2019, 5:25 am

I agree about Section 18. I have added some space. Thanks, Sara. :thumbs:

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Post by neecheelok70 » August 29th, 2019, 7:34 am

Here is 20. Good for you, Mr. Wellington! :lol:

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Post by SaraHale » August 30th, 2019, 10:58 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
August 29th, 2019, 7:34 am
Here is 20. Good for you, Mr. Wellington! :lol:
Chapter 18 and 20 are PL OK :clap:

Yes, that's Mr. Wellington for you.
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Post by neecheelok70 » August 30th, 2019, 12:34 pm

Thanks, Sara. Won't be long before we will have it done. :clap:

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Post by neecheelok70 » September 3rd, 2019, 11:08 am

Here are Sections 21 and 22. One more today! :thumbs:

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Post by neecheelok70 » September 3rd, 2019, 2:08 pm

Here are 23 and 24. :)

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Post by neecheelok70 » September 3rd, 2019, 5:08 pm

And 25 and 26. I had to know what I already knew! :thumbs:

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Post by SaraHale » September 4th, 2019, 9:51 am

Hey Jim,

I'm wondering: how did you finish the sections so quickly? Thanks! I've enjoyed listening to them. I do have very minor PL Notes for you, feel free to correct them or not.


Chapter 22.
@07m:370584 - I am sorry if I upset you. You, of course, were sensible to see my position.
It would be better if you added some silence between the 2 sentences.

Chapter 23
@04m:49.834s - Surely you have not questioned my motives? I hear "mentioned" instead of "questioned" Could you please double-check this one?

Chapter 24
@17m:53.534s - you must leave us as soon as possible." Koltsoff, who had arisen, eyed her sullenly.
It would be better if you added some silence between the 2 sentences.

Chapter 25
@09m:07.300s - "Sara told me all," she said. "She showed
It would be better if you added some silence between the 3 sentences.

Please whenever you don't have DPL for your solos, let me know so I could help. That's of course if you want me again as DPL. :mrgreen:
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Post by neecheelok70 » September 4th, 2019, 11:47 am

Of course! I appreciate any help I can get, and besides you are a pleasure to work with. I do need someone to DPL my recording of Cane by Jean Toomer. I think you would enjoy this book. And I will fix the items you have noted for our Prince or Chauffeur. :D

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Post by neecheelok70 » September 4th, 2019, 12:33 pm

I hope these corrections will do. Jim :thumbs:

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