COMPLETE Prince or Chauffeur? A Story of Newport by Lawrence Perry - dc

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Post by neecheelok70 » July 28th, 2019, 5:35 am

Thanks, Sara. No hurry required for me. Jim :D

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Post by SaraHale » July 28th, 2019, 5:39 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
July 28th, 2019, 5:35 am
Thanks, Sara. No hurry required for me. Jim :D
You're most welcome, Jim. Thanks! :D
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Post by neecheelok70 » July 31st, 2019, 11:34 am

Here is 14. :thumbs:

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Post by SaraHale » August 3rd, 2019, 3:17 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
July 31st, 2019, 11:34 am
Here is 14. :thumbs:
Hey Jim,
I'm sorry for the late reply. I think you've uploaded the wrong file. I got this "peregrinepickle2_44_smollett_128kb" when I downloaded it from the MW.

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Post by neecheelok70 » August 3rd, 2019, 5:36 am

Sorry about that. I have now entered the correct file. Thanks for your patience. Jim :)

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Post by SaraHale » August 3rd, 2019, 8:55 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
August 3rd, 2019, 5:36 am
Sorry about that. I have now entered the correct file. Thanks for your patience. Jim :)
That's okay! Chapter 14 is PL OK :clap: Same here! I'll do my best to be quick with the PL.

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Post by neecheelok70 » August 10th, 2019, 12:09 pm

Here is 15. Thanks. :thumbs:

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Post by neecheelok70 » August 14th, 2019, 5:26 am

And 16!

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Post by SaraHale » August 17th, 2019, 10:32 am

Chapter 15 & 16 are PL OK :clap:

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Post by neecheelok70 » August 18th, 2019, 7:00 am

Thanks, Sara. You have a good one as well. :)

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Post by neecheelok70 » August 18th, 2019, 7:57 am

And now 17. :thumbs:

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Post by SaraHale » August 21st, 2019, 1:17 am

Hey Jim,

Thank you for the narration. :D

I have very minor PL Notes:
  • @01m:29.569s - half to herself. I'm not sure. I feel that you were going to say oneself but switch to herself.
  • @02m:08.346s - Crying Crisply: "Helm to port." I think it would be nice if there is some silence between them. I don't like to comment on silences anymore but still wanted to mention this one. Feel free to ignore.
  • @02m:52.417s - "How do you like it?" "Oh, it is terribly..." a little silence would be nice. What do you think?


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Post by neecheelok70 » August 21st, 2019, 5:59 am

Here is the better 17. I am always willing to improve, so don't hesitate to suggest or demand! Jim :D

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Post by SaraHale » August 21st, 2019, 6:58 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
August 21st, 2019, 5:59 am
Here is the better 17. I am always willing to improve, so don't hesitate to suggest or demand! Jim :D
It's perfect now. :thumbs: Thanks so much!!

Okay, but you're doing a good job with the narration. I feel that I'm a VIP listener, not a DPL which is super cool. :D
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Post by neecheelok70 » August 21st, 2019, 8:53 am

Thanks, Sara. :D

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