COMPLETE Prince or Chauffeur? A Story of Newport by Lawrence Perry - dc

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Post by neecheelok70 » June 16th, 2019, 7:44 am

Did I fix them?

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Post by SaraHale » June 16th, 2019, 7:51 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
June 16th, 2019, 7:44 am
Did I fix them?
Yes, perfectly as well. Thanks! To be honest, I wasn't sure whether to mention it or not. So, I'm happy that I did. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :D
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Post by neecheelok70 » June 16th, 2019, 12:16 pm

Here is 7. Jim :)

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Post by SaraHale » June 16th, 2019, 12:19 pm

neecheelok70 wrote:
June 16th, 2019, 12:16 pm
Here is 7. Jim :)
Thanks, Jim! :D I'll listen to it tomorrow. Good night!
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Post by SaraHale » June 17th, 2019, 2:00 pm

Hey Jim,

Nice Narration. I would like you to double check this one for me, please.

@09:10.888 - he lifted his brows. I hear "she" instead of "he". I may be mistaken.

The rest is word-prefect narration. :thumbs:
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Post by neecheelok70 » June 17th, 2019, 4:56 pm

Funny, at first I didn't hear it, but getting closer, it was certainly a sex-change operation. :lol:

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Post by neecheelok70 » June 19th, 2019, 5:06 pm

Chapter 8!

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Post by neecheelok70 » June 25th, 2019, 1:08 pm

And 9. :)

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Post by SaraHale » June 27th, 2019, 10:09 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
June 17th, 2019, 4:56 pm
Funny, at first I didn't hear it, but getting closer, it was certainly a sex-change operation. :lol:
Hello, Dr. Jim.

Sorry for the late report but the operation is a huge success. Well done! :clap:

I'll PL chapter 8 & 9.
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Post by SaraHale » June 27th, 2019, 10:49 am

Hello again,

Chapter 8 and 9 are PL OK. :clap:
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Post by neecheelok70 » June 27th, 2019, 11:12 am

Thanks, Sara. :D

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Post by SaraHale » June 27th, 2019, 11:22 am

You're most welcome.
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Post by neecheelok70 » June 28th, 2019, 12:20 pm

Here is 10. No hurry. Jim :)

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Post by SaraHale » July 2nd, 2019, 11:01 am

Hey Jim,

Chapter 10 is PL OK. :clap:

I've noticed these notes but they aren't a big deal. I would let it pass if it is my recording. But I would like to let you know about them. And a proof that I listened closely to the recording. :D

@10m:07.970s - He had knowledge. I hear "he acknowledged".

@10m:27.018s - any but his own hands. I think I hear "anybody own hands".
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Post by neecheelok70 » July 2nd, 2019, 11:25 am

I'll fix tonight. Thanks.

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