COMPLETE Prince or Chauffeur? A Story of Newport by Lawrence Perry - dc
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Thanks, Sara. No hurry required for me. Jim
You're most welcome, Jim. Thanks!
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Hey Jim,
I'm sorry for the late reply. I think you've uploaded the wrong file. I got this "peregrinepickle2_44_smollett_128kb" when I downloaded it from the MW.
Have a nice day!
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Sorry about that. I have now entered the correct file. Thanks for your patience. Jim
That's okay! Chapter 14 is PL OK Same here! I'll do my best to be quick with the PL.neecheelok70 wrote: ↑August 3rd, 2019, 5:36 am Sorry about that. I have now entered the correct file. Thanks for your patience. Jim
Have a nice day!
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Thanks, Sara. You have a good one as well.
Hey Jim,
Thank you for the narration.
I have very minor PL Notes:
Have a nice day!
Thank you for the narration.
I have very minor PL Notes:
- @01m:29.569s - half to herself. I'm not sure. I feel that you were going to say oneself but switch to herself.
- @02m:08.346s - Crying Crisply: "Helm to port." I think it would be nice if there is some silence between them. I don't like to comment on silences anymore but still wanted to mention this one. Feel free to ignore.
- @02m:52.417s - "How do you like it?" "Oh, it is terribly..." a little silence would be nice. What do you think?
Have a nice day!
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Here is the better 17. I am always willing to improve, so don't hesitate to suggest or demand! Jim
It's perfect now. Thanks so much!!neecheelok70 wrote: ↑August 21st, 2019, 5:59 am Here is the better 17. I am always willing to improve, so don't hesitate to suggest or demand! Jim
Okay, but you're doing a good job with the narration. I feel that I'm a VIP listener, not a DPL which is super cool.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.