COMPLETE Prince or Chauffeur? A Story of Newport by Lawrence Perry - dc

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 28th, 2019, 5:35 am

Thanks, Sara. No hurry required for me. Jim

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » July 28th, 2019, 5:39 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑July 28th, 2019, 5:35 am Thanks, Sara. No hurry required for me. Jim

You're most welcome, Jim. Thanks!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » July 31st, 2019, 11:34 am

Here is 14.

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » August 3rd, 2019, 3:17 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑July 31st, 2019, 11:34 am Here is 14.

Hey Jim,
I'm sorry for the late reply. I think you've uploaded the wrong file. I got this "peregrinepickle2_44_smollett_128kb" when I downloaded it from the MW.

Have a nice day!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 3rd, 2019, 5:36 am

Sorry about that. I have now entered the correct file. Thanks for your patience. Jim

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » August 3rd, 2019, 8:55 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑August 3rd, 2019, 5:36 am Sorry about that. I have now entered the correct file. Thanks for your patience. Jim

That's okay! Chapter 14 is PL OK

Same here! I'll do my best to be quick with the PL.

Have a nice day!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 10th, 2019, 12:09 pm

Here is 15. Thanks.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 14th, 2019, 5:26 am

And 16!

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » August 17th, 2019, 10:32 am

Chapter 15 & 16 are PL OK

Have a nice day!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 18th, 2019, 7:00 am

Thanks, Sara. You have a good one as well.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 18th, 2019, 7:57 am

And now 17.

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » August 21st, 2019, 1:17 am

Hey Jim,

Thank you for the narration.

I have very minor PL Notes:

@01m:29.569s - half to herself. I'm not sure. I feel that you were going to say oneself but switch to herself.

@02m:08.346s - Crying Crisply: "Helm to port." I think it would be nice if there is some silence between them. I don't like to comment on silences anymore but still wanted to mention this one. Feel free to ignore.

@02m:52.417s - "How do you like it?" "Oh, it is terribly..." a little silence would be nice. What do you think?

Have a nice day!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 21st, 2019, 5:59 am

Here is the better 17. I am always willing to improve, so don't hesitate to suggest or demand! Jim

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » August 21st, 2019, 6:58 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑August 21st, 2019, 5:59 am Here is the better 17. I am always willing to improve, so don't hesitate to suggest or demand! Jim

It's perfect now.

Thanks so much!!

Okay, but you're doing a good job with the narration. I feel that I'm a VIP listener, not a DPL which is super cool.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » August 21st, 2019, 8:53 am

Thanks, Sara.