[COMPLETE][POETRY] The Poems of Madison Cawein, Volume 3 by Madison Cawein - kit

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JorWat
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Post by JorWat » June 11th, 2019, 2:40 pm

irondog70 wrote:
June 8th, 2019, 6:35 pm
Aureoles are properly cooked now:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_030_cawein_128kb.mp3
Duration:7:53 (same as before)
Sorry for the extra time :)
PL OK
Horner94 wrote:
June 9th, 2019, 11:34 am
Hello,

I have reduced the volume of Section 200.
Please review audio recording by clicking the following link:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_200_cawein_128kb.mp3 Time: 03:03
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad
PL OK
elsieselwyn wrote:
June 9th, 2019, 11:47 am
Here are all my sections:

Section 178: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_178_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:13)

Section 179: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_179_cawein_128kb.mp3 (4:53)

Section 180: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_180_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:33)

Section 181: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_181_cawein_128kb.mp3 (1:56)

Section 182: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_182_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:28)

Section 183: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_183_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:07)

Section 185: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_185_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:44)

Section 186: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_186_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:14)

Section 187: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_187_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:21)

Section 188: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_188_cawein_128kb.mp3 (3:02)

Section 189: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_189_cawein_128kb.mp3 (1:49)
Most are PL OK

185:

1:13: 'Or, with a smile, through watery depths' should be 'Or, with a smile, through watery deeps' (so it rhymes with 'sleeps' and 'leaps' in the nest few lines)

187:

0:56: 'celandine' in 'Now golden celandine' should be prounounced 'SEL-uhn-dahyn' (so that it rhymes with 'vine' and 'shine')

189:

1:46: The ending silence is too short. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got about 3.6 seconds.
Jordan

Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.


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Post by silverquill » June 12th, 2019, 7:14 am

MW updated and these are marked Ready for Spot PL.



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Post by silverquill » June 12th, 2019, 10:09 pm

Stefan and Miria9:

These are all in the MW Ready for PL.
Thanks so much. :)

Horner94
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Post by Horner94 » June 13th, 2019, 3:18 pm

Hello,
Here is Section 47 amended: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_047_cawein_128kb.mp3 Time: 08:27
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad

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Post by Mira9 » June 13th, 2019, 7:28 pm

silverquill wrote:
June 12th, 2019, 10:09 pm
Stefan and Miria9:

These are all in the MW Ready for PL.
Thanks so much. :)
Awesome!! :) Thank you! :)

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Post by silverquill » June 13th, 2019, 9:35 pm

Horner94 wrote:
June 13th, 2019, 3:18 pm
Hello,
Here is Section 47 amended: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_047_cawein_128kb.mp3 Time: 08:27
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad
Thank you!
MW updated and marked Ready for Spot PL.

brightwriter419
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Post by brightwriter419 » June 14th, 2019, 9:09 am

Here are a couple more poems from me.

#18: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_018_cawein_128kb.mp3 (duration 2:42)
#61: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_061_cawein_128kb.mp3 (duration 1:59)

I should have my last two ready soon.

Matt

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Post by JorWat » June 14th, 2019, 3:24 pm

All three are PL OK
svonb002 wrote:
June 12th, 2019, 8:25 pm
Here are sections 10, 29, 32, 54, 78, 80, 111, 139, 149, 173, 206, 226, and 238.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_010_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:41 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_029_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:46 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_032_cawein_128kb.mp3 2:17 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_054_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:59 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_078_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:10 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_080_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:17 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_111_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:32 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_139_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:28 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_149_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:56 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_173_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:32 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_206_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:47 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_226_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:42 min

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_238_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:34 min
All except 173 are PL OK.

173:

0:47: I'm hearing 'slouch-plummed hat' instead of 'slouch-plumed hat'.
8:

0:00: The opening silence is too long. It should be "no more than 0.5 to 1 second", and yours is over 1.8 seconds.

13:

0:00: The opening silence is too long. It should be "no more than 0.5 to 1 second", and yours is over 1.8 seconds.
1:49: The ending silence is too short. It should be "~5 seconds", and yours is less than 3.5 seconds.

25:

0:00: The opening silence is too long. It should be "no more than 0.5 to 1 second", and yours is over 2.5 seconds.
1:18: The ending silence is too short. It should be "~5 seconds", and yours is less than 2.5 seconds.


56:

0:00: The opening silence is too long. It should be "no more than 0.5 to 1 second", and yours is over 1.1 seconds. Yeah, it's probably fine, but if you're fixing the end silence, you might as well do this too.
1:18: The ending silence is too short. It should be "~5 seconds", and yours is less than 3 seconds.
Horner94 wrote:
June 13th, 2019, 3:18 pm
Hello,
Here is Section 47 amended: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_047_cawein_128kb.mp3 Time: 08:27
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad
PL OK
brightwriter419 wrote:
June 14th, 2019, 9:09 am
Here are a couple more poems from me.

#18: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_018_cawein_128kb.mp3 (duration 2:42)
#61: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_061_cawein_128kb.mp3 (duration 1:59)

I should have my last two ready soon.

Matt
Both are PL OK
Jordan

Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.

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Post by svonb002 » June 14th, 2019, 5:59 pm

~ Stefan V.

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Post by silverquill » June 14th, 2019, 9:13 pm

svonb002 wrote:
June 14th, 2019, 5:59 pm
Here is corrected section 173.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_173_cawein_128kb.mp3 1:33 min
Ready for Spot PL
Thanks.


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