elsieselwyn, notes on my reading for you.
Typos I corrected in this one:
Page B-1, paragraph 1
I read "assist a reader in the reading the rest of the report"
as "assist a reader in reading the rest of the report"
Page B-1, under "Bogacheva, Anna"
I read "to interfere in in the 2016 U.S. presidential election"
as "to interfere in the 2016 U.S. presidential election"
Page B-2, under "Burt, Richard"
I read "who had done work Alfa-Bank"
as "who had done work for Alfa-Bank"
And I double-checked that he actually worked for
them, and not with
them or something.
Also, in the list of "Acronyms" on the last page, I included alternate pronunciations when I understood them to exist beyond the initials:
I read "NATO" as "Nayto, N.A.T.O."
I read "DCCC" as "D.C.C.C. or D. Triple-C."
If those don't work as recorded, or if there are others like this I should include (e.g., if people say "odney" for "ODNI") please LMK.
Keeping in mind those who will never see the page, I tried to distinguish when the entire entry was redacted, and when only a part of it was.
I hope that's clear.