[COMPLETE] Courage by Ruth Ogden (Dramatic Reading) - tg

cowguy02 · Post by **cowguy02** » July 8th, 2019, 8:34 am

ej400 wrote: ↑July 8th, 2019, 7:54 am PL notes for David/Mr. Leverett

You say "Gentleman, David, Mr. Eder" should be "Gentleman, David Mr. Leverett".

@ 1:13 You say "Sure it looks like a snail" should be "Sure it looks like a sail". Big difference <laughing> Maybe there's snail on the sail? <mrgreen>

@ 1:20 wrongly colored lines "Then for several minutes all was silent." Can you please remove that as it is the narrator's lines?

You forgot your lines for L'envoi

Good reading Luke, you put great character into your character!

There is only one Lenovi line. Let me check and make sure it’s there

I’ll get right on those changes.

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » July 8th, 2019, 8:47 am

ej400 wrote: ↑July 8th, 2019, 7:29 am I can do Father and Bruce so were full. Might change my voice a little bit for both <smile>

Thank you!

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » July 8th, 2019, 8:50 am

Also, its Mr/Mrs. Everett

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » July 8th, 2019, 8:54 am

silverquill wrote: ↑July 8th, 2019, 8:25 am
ej400 wrote: ↑May 30th, 2019, 5:49 am Larry

Chapters 5, 6, 7 & 8 are all PL OK!

Chapter 3 PL notes:

@ 1:05 Missing lines “That's so,”

L'envoi PL notes:

Text says: “the land that is very far off;”, I heard "the land is not very far off".

Also, there's not a lot of silence between your lines... but it's enough that I'm sure bhavya can manage.

Realized I haven't given you the corrections I recorded.
I tried for three seconds of silence between lines, which is what I've always done for plays and DR's.
If I need to change this for your project, I will. Just let me know.

"I tried for three seconds of silence between lines, which is what I've always done for plays and DR's." Its alright

I'm a little confused; are these the edited files Larry?
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_03_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_lenvoi_128kb.mp3

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » July 8th, 2019, 9:23 am

bhavya wrote: ↑July 8th, 2019, 8:54 am "I tried for three seconds of silence between lines, which is what I've always done for plays and DR's." Its alright

I'm a little confused; are these the edited files Larry?
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_03_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_lenvoi_128kb.mp3

I'm guessing so, because they are PL OK!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » July 8th, 2019, 12:28 pm

Sorry, I must have deleted one of the end quotes. But, yes, these are the corrected files. Looks as if you got them.
Thanks, Elijah.

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » July 8th, 2019, 9:29 pm

Awesome! Thank you both!

cowguy02 · Post by **cowguy02** » July 8th, 2019, 10:45 pm

ej400 wrote: ↑July 8th, 2019, 7:54 am PL notes for David/Mr. Leverett

You say "Gentleman, David, Mr. Eder" should be "Gentleman, David Mr. Leverett".

@ 1:13 You say "Sure it looks like a snail" should be "Sure it looks like a sail". Big difference <laughing> Maybe there's snail on the sail? <mrgreen>

@ 1:20 wrongly colored lines "Then for several minutes all was silent." Can you please remove that as it is the narrator's lines?

You forgot your lines for L'envoi

Good reading Luke, you put great character into your character!

here is the fixed file. https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_gentleman:david:_mr._everett_4_128kb_.mp3

I checked and the lines for lenovi were there. maybe they were just missed?

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » July 12th, 2019, 7:22 am

Dick is ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_dick_6_128kb.mp3 -1:07

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » July 12th, 2019, 8:12 am

Gentleman, David, Mr. Everett is PL OK!

bhavya, I didn't put the new link in the MW.

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » July 12th, 2019, 8:13 am

...This also means that Chapters 7, 8 & l'envoi are ready to edit!

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » July 12th, 2019, 9:09 am

ej400 wrote: ↑July 12th, 2019, 8:12 am Gentleman, David, Mr. Everett is PL OK!

bhavya, I didn't put the new link in the MW.

Okay,I'll update it.

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » July 12th, 2019, 9:10 am

ej400 wrote: ↑July 12th, 2019, 8:13 am ...This also means that Chapters 7, 8 & l'envoi are ready to edit!

Awesome! I'll get to it soon.

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » July 12th, 2019, 9:10 am

ej400 wrote: ↑July 12th, 2019, 7:22 am Dick is ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_dick_6_128kb.mp3 -1:07

I'll PL this tomorrow.

EDIT: PL OK!

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » July 16th, 2019, 9:31 am

Father and Bruce are ready for PL.