[COMPLETE] World's Best Poetry, Vol. 9 (Part II) - kit

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Post by afutterer » June 7th, 2019, 6:52 am

YOU TOO!
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Post by Kitty » June 8th, 2019, 6:00 am

WiltedScribe wrote:
June 7th, 2019, 1:19 pm
My last bunch of DRs are now done.
excellent job, Tomas, on all of them. :thumbs: I especially lived this alleged friend of humanity LOL what a contrast from beginning of the poem to the end ;) The turkey-cock also was brilliant and of course the Baker. I love that poem and it's coming together nicely.

All PL ok, apart from one small note for the Boston Girl (great accent, btw)

> at 0:10: "I did not catch your remark, because / I was so entranced with that charming vaws! - I would definitely make a break after "because", like indicated in the poem outline, since the pun of the poem is based on the word "vase" rhyming with the last word in the previous line, and the way you make the break, this rhythm/rhyme gets lost.

I have already assembled this poem (only waiting for your line to paste in), and I am pleased to say, each of us girls really nailed it, our "vase" totally rhymes each time with the word Craig is saying before. :thumbs: Well done !

There were actually not that many that I was able to assemble, only two...

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetryvolume9_2_065_various_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:11 min.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetryvolume9_2_106_various_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:45 min.

Thanks

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Post by WiltedScribe » June 9th, 2019, 10:00 pm

Kitty wrote:
June 8th, 2019, 6:00 am
> at 0:10: "I did not catch your remark, because / I was so entranced with that charming vaws! - I would definitely make a break after "because", like indicated in the poem outline, since the pun of the poem is based on the word "vase" rhyming with the last word in the previous line, and the way you make the break, this rhythm/rhyme gets lost.
You're right Sonia, having that break is important and I should have known better. :oops: I elongated the "because" now to make the rhyme with "vaws" more evident. If you still think the break is too short you can add a bit of silence in between if needed.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetryvolume9_2_112_various_tomas_128kb.mp3
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Post by Kitty » June 10th, 2019, 2:01 am

WiltedScribe wrote:
June 9th, 2019, 10:00 pm
I elongated the "because" now to make the rhyme with "vaws" more evident. If you still think the break is too short you can add a bit of silence in between if needed.
thanks, now this is much better and PL ok. Now I can hear what it's supposed to be rhyming on.

So here is the finished product, it's a very funny poem.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetryvolume9_2_112_various_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:22 min.

Sonia

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Post by leanneyauyau » June 11th, 2019, 7:31 am

Are all my bits PL OK? Can I unsub?
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Post by Kitty » June 12th, 2019, 12:10 am

leanneyauyau wrote:
June 11th, 2019, 7:31 am
Are all my bits PL OK? Can I unsub?
as far as I can see, yes, you're parts are all PL ok. Good luck with all your other projects, Leanne !

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Post by afutterer » June 18th, 2019, 7:34 am

PL NOTES:

SECTIONS - 65, 106, 112

PL OK
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Post by Kitty » June 20th, 2019, 6:17 am

jasonb wrote:
June 20th, 2019, 5:49 am
A few for this morning
:lol: I love the high voice of Little Breeches now :thumbs: quite funny, very fitting for this project. You also did a great job on the Germanisms of Ritter Hugo. In fact, all 4 parts are PL ok. Thanks for another boost in the DRs.

For the moment I'll mark them all ready to edit...so if anyone likes to help out, feel free to claim a section here :) Otherwise I'll probably do it tomorrow.

Thanks

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Post by Kitty » June 20th, 2019, 6:30 am

jasonb wrote:
June 20th, 2019, 6:23 am
And a few more before I head out to work.
excellent job, Jason, all PL ok. I had to laugh when I heard Noah talking about the overflow :lol: So another 5 DRs are ready to assemble. YAY. We're making good progress here. I'll mark them ready to edit in the MW.

I hope your working day won't be stressful !

Thanks again

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Post by Foon » June 20th, 2019, 12:36 pm

Foon - Please correct my pronunciation!


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Post by Kitty » June 20th, 2019, 11:07 pm

thank you, Foon :9: updating MW. I will try to do a few later on as well

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Post by Kitty » June 21st, 2019, 12:36 am

just for info: I'm starting to edit together poems 77, 79 and 89 now

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