COMPLETE[PLAY]The "Mind The Paint" Girl by Pinero - thw

PetitPoiSon · Post by **PetitPoiSon** » April 24th, 2019, 8:30 am

Bonjour !
May I claim Gabrielle Kato please?
A bientôt
Pauline

Post by **Kitty** » April 24th, 2019, 8:44 am

PetitPoiSon wrote: ↑April 24th, 2019, 8:30 am May I claim Gabrielle Kato please?

you may, thank you so much, Pauline

Sonia

DuckTD · Post by **DuckTD** » April 24th, 2019, 2:19 pm

Thank you so much for your feedback and coaching, Sonia!

I'll get to work on Act 3.

DuckTD · Post by **DuckTD** » April 24th, 2019, 5:46 pm

Here are Mrs. Upjohn's lines for Act 3. The clip is only 1 minute and 48 seconds.
Tracy

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_3_128kb.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » April 24th, 2019, 11:34 pm

DuckTD wrote: ↑April 24th, 2019, 5:46 pmHere are Mrs. Upjohn's lines for Act 3. The clip is only 1 minute and 48 seconds.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_3_128kb.mp3

excellent small scene, Tracy

I like the part where she is miffed that Lily is not taking her into her confidence. You're good at pouting

Nothing missing but the background noise is quite disturbing. Did you forget to do a round of noise-cleaning here ? Since there is nothing else missing, I guess I can mark it PL ok and make a note for Todd in the MW, but for the next act, please think about noise-cleaning

It makes it more easy for my ears to listen to.

Thank you !

Todd: I saw that Mrs Upjohn is not in Act 2, so I will delete that section in the MW.

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » April 25th, 2019, 6:29 am

Thank you.

Todd

DuckTD · Post by **DuckTD** » April 25th, 2019, 4:55 pm

You're good at pouting

Haha! That makes me laugh!

I have uploaded a new version with the noise cleaning applied. (Learned something new today.)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_3_128kb.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » April 26th, 2019, 12:46 am

DuckTD wrote: ↑April 25th, 2019, 4:55 pmI have uploaded a new version with the noise cleaning applied. (Learned something new today.)

awww thank you for that. This will save Todd some time in the end and yes, it definitely sounds better now.

PL ok definitely now.

And noise-cleaning is an important tool and quite easy to do in Audacity (are you using that program ?) I think many, if not most of us use it in each recording.

Sonia

lymiewithpurpose · Post by **lymiewithpurpose** » April 26th, 2019, 5:02 pm

Here's my next act!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_jeyes_3_128kb.mp3
13:23

Post by **ToddHW** » April 26th, 2019, 6:25 pm

Thank you.

Todd

DuckTD · Post by **DuckTD** » April 26th, 2019, 8:45 pm

And noise-cleaning is an important tool and quite easy to do in Audacity (are you using that program ?) I think many, if not most of us use it in each recording.

Yes, I am using Audacity. And, it's true. Noise cleaning is super easy and effective. Thanks for pushing me to figure it out.

Post by **Kitty** » April 27th, 2019, 8:04 am

lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑April 26th, 2019, 5:02 pm Here's my next act!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_jeyes_3_128kb.mp3

oh quite a change in character here from the beginning of the 3rd Act to the ending. During his candid confession of his character and background story with Lily, I started to pity the poor guy. If it was a ruse to make her fall for him again, it was craftily done

Excellent job here, Campbell and nothing missing I think. Can be marked PL ok straight away.

Thanks

Sonia

Foon · Post by **Foon** » April 27th, 2019, 12:21 pm

Here are the first two acts of Lily, the other two are recorded and will come soon

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_lilyparadell_1_128kb.mp3 16:30
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_lilyparadell_2_128kb.mp3 6:27

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » April 28th, 2019, 4:40 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaint_enid_3_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » April 28th, 2019, 6:15 am

Thank you both.

Todd