what an absolute riot at that party !!!! It must have been a lot of visuals to the audience to have so many people on stage and each talking in their small groups or in dialogues in different corners. Even here there are so many voices, but we all sound so distinct and they are all very different characters. I especially loved the great finale with Lilly laughing happily while the curtain falls. Very funny was also the drunkard Fulkerson showing up all through the act
And the merging of voices was expertly done, it's great that you put them one after the other the way you did, but still blending into each other, Todd.
I have only a few small notes:
> at 13:52: missing stage direction: Ha, Dolly! Kissing her. How are you, my dear? - I'm not sure if Brad inserted a kissing sound here that you maybe wanted to use and then forgot
> from-26:40-27:05: "Many happy returns of the day!" I must admit, this assemblage felt quite a bit too long for my taste, the first half was ok but then it started to be a bit overkill. There were not nearly enough people on stage to warrant such a long greeting. I think with only half the length you would already amply convey a huge party with lots of guests congratulating Lilly.
> at 44:27: Bland to Nita "Nita" - I think here we can cut the stage direction, since Bland says the name, we all know who he is talking to
the rest perfect as always, and highly entertaining ! Bravo all !
Sonia