COMPLETE[PLAY]The "Mind The Paint" Girl by Pinero - thw

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Post by PetitPoiSon » May 31st, 2019, 2:45 am

Kitty wrote:
May 30th, 2019, 6:27 am

Only here, you missed a few lines:

> at about 0:20: please insert two lines missing: "Really? Oh, you are full of news." and "Oh, I’m all right, I s’pose. Isn’t it hot?"

> at about 0:32: you missed all the "ladies" lines. We may not use all the voices in all the choruses, but it would be good if Todd had a choice of voices to select from: "Many happy returns of the day!" and "How d’ye do, Mr. Smythe?" and "How are you, Carlton?" and "Ha, ha, ha!"

thank you

Sonia
Hi sonia, here is the new version of the file, corrected:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_gabriellekato_2_128kb.mp3
A bientôt !
Pauline

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Post by benderca » May 31st, 2019, 4:13 am

Todd,

Just wanted to let you know that The Hon. Mrs. Arthur Stidulph is recorded, but still needs to be edited.
TJ

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Post by ToddHW » May 31st, 2019, 5:25 am

Thank you.

I have to be out of touch for a few days. I'll pick this back up when I return.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » May 31st, 2019, 5:44 am

PetitPoiSon wrote:
May 31st, 2019, 2:45 am
Hi sonia, here is the new version of the file, corrected:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_gabriellekato_2_128kb.mp3
merci Pauline, tout à fait PL ok maintenant :thumbs: à la prochaine !

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Post by DuckTD » June 2nd, 2019, 2:02 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_4_128kb.mp3

Here is Mrs. Upjohn, Act 4. It is 6 min, 40 seconds. :)

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Post by Kitty » June 3rd, 2019, 1:47 am

DuckTD wrote:
June 2nd, 2019, 2:02 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_4_128kb.mp3
Here is Mrs. Upjohn, Act 4. It is 6 min, 40 seconds. :)
brilliant performance, I really really like Mrs Upjohn and her lower class accent :lol: you really gave her a believable character here, Tracy :thumbs: wonderfully done all throughout. There's only one tiny bit missing:

> at about 5:36: missing line: Mrs. Upjohn, partially disappearing. "Ah—!"

> at 6:42: “end of act 4” - can be cut out, it's the narrator’s job to say that

thank you !

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Post by DuckTD » June 3rd, 2019, 4:37 pm

Thank you for your wonderfully encouraging words. :9:
I know I recorded the Ah; I must have accidentally deleted it. Rats! You have an eagle eye; thanks for catching it. I will have to figure out how to insert a bit into my recording and re-upload. :hmm:

> at about 5:36: missing line: Mrs. Upjohn, partially disappearing. "Ah—!"

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Post by Kitty » June 3rd, 2019, 11:06 pm

DuckTD wrote:
June 3rd, 2019, 4:37 pm
I know I recorded the Ah; I must have accidentally deleted it. Rats! You have an eagle eye; thanks for catching it. I will have to figure out how to insert a bit into my recording and re-upload. :hmm:
are you using Audacity ? The easiest way to do it (at least that's how I do it):

> record the line in a new window
> amplify or clean-up as you would your normal recording
> highlight the part, then press "copy"
> open your finished Act 4 file, place the cursor on the right spot and press "Paste"
> then re-export to mp3 again and reupload

hope this helps

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Post by PetitPoiSon » June 3rd, 2019, 11:13 pm

Bonjour !
Here is the file for Gabrielle Kato's Act 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_gabriellekato_3_128kb.mp3
A bientôt !
Pauline

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Post by Kitty » June 3rd, 2019, 11:26 pm

PetitPoiSon wrote:
June 3rd, 2019, 11:13 pm
Here is the file for Gabrielle Kato's Act 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_gabriellekato_3_128kb.mp3
perfect, Pauline, this is totally PL ok. No lines missing, I think you caught all the "others" lines this time. :thumbs: Gabrielle is a sweetie.

Thanks for participating. Now you can lie back and wait for the end result ;)

Sonia

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Post by PetitPoiSon » June 4th, 2019, 2:59 am

Kitty wrote:
June 3rd, 2019, 11:26 pm
PetitPoiSon wrote:
June 3rd, 2019, 11:13 pm
Here is the file for Gabrielle Kato's Act 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_gabriellekato_3_128kb.mp3
perfect, Pauline, this is totally PL ok. No lines missing, I think you caught all the "others" lines this time. :thumbs: Gabrielle is a sweetie.

Thanks for participating. Now you can lie back and wait for the end result ;)

Sonia
Thank you Sonia!
I will start my next solo project now :)
À bientôt :9:
Pauline

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Post by silverquill » June 11th, 2019, 6:49 am

This should help -- Stage directions for Act I.
I've tried my best to get all the lines and make a few corrections.
Let me know if you want something different for the Persons of the Play.


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3 44:55
~Larry


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Post by Kitty » June 13th, 2019, 2:09 am

silverquill wrote:
June 11th, 2019, 6:49 am
This should help -- Stage directions for Act I.
I've tried my best to get all the lines and make a few corrections.
ok this took a bit of time, Pinero is always a lot to listen to. First of all, that was sooo sweet when you gave that little chuckle after the slipper-ceremony. It sounded so honestly amused by it all. I adored this bit ! :9: That really puts the narrator totally among the cast.
Let me know if you want something different for the Persons of the Play.
you omitted a few things that were written in the MW, like "the four beauties of the Pandora" but I think all 4 readers already gave us the correct credits. I would say, it can be left like this. I know you'll be around if we need a last-minute addition from the narrator, then you can always do it then.

However, there are quite a few missing lines in Act 1, which need to be inserted. Best of course to start from the end, so my time-stamps stay correct for you. Here's the list:

> at 0:01: for the disclaimer you would have to start with “Act 1 of The Mind the Paint Girl”

> at 2:31: “The action of the piece takes place in London” – you say “pieces”

> at about 7:31: “singing” – might be optional in case the reader is singing this, but better include it, just in case

> at about 7:36: “Farncombe nods”

> at about 8:26: “Mrs Upjohn enters.”

> at about 8:42: “pleasantly”

> at about 11:33: “quietly”

> at about 11:39: two things missing: “Roper, sarcastically” and “stopping before Mrs. Upjohn”

> at about 16:47: “to Mrs Upjohn”

> at about 17:18: “passing him”

> at about 17:38: “Roper, Taking the fan from Mrs Upjohn

> at about 25:27: “To Jimmie and de Castro.”

> at 30:04: “and she returns his look with awakened interest” – you say “awkward”

> at about 42:57: “meeting his eyes”

Then I have a note to Todd:

> at 5:26-5:32: “Note: Throughout, “right” and “left” are the spectators’ right and left, not the actor’s.” – I think this note is not important, and could be cut out, but I let Todd decide. So for the moment, let's leave it in

Thank you, Larry !

Sonia

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Post by ToddHW » June 13th, 2019, 3:14 am

The Note does indicate that things here are the opposite of the more usual "stage right" and "stage left" convention. Please leave it in for now.

Thanks, Todd

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