Hey there, I'm here to PL for Devorah . Anyways, nice reading! I'm excited to hear how this comes together, everybody has such wonderful personality! Anyways, I have just a few notes:silverquill wrote: ↑March 29th, 2019, 10:42 am Here is Figgins for Everybody's Husband:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everybodyshusband_figgins_ryan.mp3 4:05
The first line you included ("I hear my guardian...") is actually Miss Thompson’s, so there is no need to include it here
1:32 – Heard ‘Alex’, text says ‘Alexis’, mentioning it because it is a character’s name
End – missing ‘All’ line (“All, all!”)
Also I have a few questions for Devorah. Both of them have to do with little space for stage directions when they were provided vocally:
0:35 – [forced laugh] stage direction, included as vocal sound effect with no pause to insert stage directions
3:57 – around 1 second of silence for the [loudly] stage direction
Are either of these things you would like changed? Or would you like to keep the wonderful vocal effects provided by Larry?
Overall, great reading Larry! I am enjoying listening so much