COMPLETE[PLAYS]One Act Play Collection 012 - thw

Post by **Kitty** » September 24th, 2019, 11:09 pm

silverquill wrote: ↑September 24th, 2019, 10:12 pmSure. I wasn't sure about editing a play I have a part in, but I'd be glad to lend a hand Neither one is too hard.
It'll be good to get these wrapped up and close the project.

excellent, thank you so much Larry. I'll put you in charge for Wanted Male Cook then.

Looking forward to PLing this.

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » September 25th, 2019, 6:18 am

And I will start another collection (Lucky 13!) when this one is complete.

Thanks, Todd

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 26th, 2019, 10:14 pm

Oh, my! Everyone else sounds so good in this! Such talent.

I hope the edited play comes together okay.
This took longer than I thought (like most LV things) but was a lot of fun to do.

So, get rid of them black rocks, bile the kettle and . ... what you call Meow-Meow!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays012_10_various_128kb.mp3 21:26

Post by **Kitty** » September 27th, 2019, 5:08 am

silverquill wrote: ↑September 26th, 2019, 10:14 pmOh, my! Everyone else sounds so good in this! Such talent.

everyone was great (and that includes you, Larry !)

it sounds great and funny, all assembled. I especially loved all the accents displayed. This is mayhem

I have a few suggestions for cuts however. Especially in the dialogue with Joshua, you leave a bit too long pauses. If you could cut a bit at the following places, that would be more fast-paced.

> at 5:27-5:29: (p. 64) between “that’s where I come from” and “can you cook” – lengthy pause
> at 5:30-5:32: (p.64) between “can you cook” and “look here squire” – lengthy pause
> at 6:01-6:03: (p. 65) between “in our town” and “well Joshua” - lengthy pause
> at 6:15-6:17: (p. 65) between “will that do” and “one dollar and a half” - lengthy pause
> at 6:44-6:46: (p. 65) between “things for breakfast” and “yes squire” - lengthy pause
> at 11:51: (p. 68) “exit left” – since it’s Joshua speaking, you could cut out “Joshua” from this stage direction
> at 17:33-17:35: (p. 71) between “in five minutes” and “ah thanks” – lengthy pause
> at 19:07: (p. 72) “seizing them” – also here “Joshua" could be cut
> at 21:16: (p. 75) last sentence from François is missing: “Nor how I cook ze pussy what you call meow meow” (I remember that Pauline said this, so you must have cut it by mistake)

But on the whole, a great job and it was so fast ! Thank you, Larry.

Sonia

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 27th, 2019, 7:52 am

Okay, tightened up all of those places and restored the last "meow, meow"
Thanks for your keen ear again, Sonia.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays012_10_various_128kb.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » September 27th, 2019, 8:04 am

silverquill wrote: ↑September 27th, 2019, 7:52 am Okay, tightened up all of those places and restored the last "meow, meow"
Thanks for your keen ear again, Sonia.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays012_10_various_128kb.mp3

thank you, Larry for the fast turn-around.

This is PL ok now.

That only leaves one final play to assemble. I don't know how far Elsie is with it and seeing that she is busy with school right now, I was wondering whether she would need help.

I already PMed her but she hasn't picked it up yet. Not really sure how to proceed now to keep this project from stagnating. I hope she will give us some status update soon.

Sonia

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 27th, 2019, 8:47 am

I would be glad to edit that one too if needed. Just let me know.

Post by **Kitty** » September 27th, 2019, 8:49 am

silverquill wrote: ↑September 27th, 2019, 8:47 am I would be glad to edit that one too if needed. Just let me know.

yes thank you, I will keep you in mind. It's just that Elsie mentioned that she started already. I wouldn't want to do any double work for anybody.

If she at least could upload her work already, then you would only have to finish, in case she doesn't have too much time anymore. But for that we need her to log in and read this.

I'll try another PM

Sonia

elsieselwyn · Post by **elsieselwyn** » September 27th, 2019, 5:24 pm

Hi everyone! Sorry for being so late on this one - anyway, I finished editing it together (but thank you for the very kind offer to do so, Larry).

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays012_07_various_128kb.mp3 (26:50)

Post by **ToddHW** » September 27th, 2019, 6:26 pm

Thank you. Ready for PL - note it isn't PD for everyone.

I'll start getting ready for Collection 13!

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » September 27th, 2019, 6:29 pm

Let me just repeat the cast list one more time in case there should be any more changes.

Cast list: 
01. The Flying Doctor by Moliere, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
Valère, in love with Lucile: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
Sganarelle, servant to Valère: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
Gorgibus, father to Lucile: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12874">Aaron White</a> 
Gros-René, valet to Gorgibus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">alanmapstone</a> 
A Lawyer: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10614">Leanne Yau</a> 
Lucile: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11084">Devorah Allen</a> 
Sabine, cousin to Lucile: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12500">Foon</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a> 
 
02. At Saint Judas' by Henry Blake Fuller, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7079">Chuck Williamson</a> 
The Bridegroom: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11535">Nemo</a> 
The Best Man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
The Sacristan: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a> 
 
03. The Grandmother by Lajos Biro, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12506">Bhavya</a> 
The Grandmother: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a> 
The Blond Young Lady: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12500">Foon</a> 
The Brunette Young Lady: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a> 
The Bride: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13257">Elsie Selwyn</a> 
The Vivacious Girl: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a> 
The Melancholy Girl: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12506">Bhavya</a> 
The Sentimental High School Girl: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11084">Devorah Allen</a> 
The Jovial Young Man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13022">Josh Kibbey</a> 
The Polite Young Man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7079">Chuck Williamson</a> 
The Disagreeable Young Man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
Stage directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13072">Campbell Schelp</a> 
 
04. Everybody's Husband by Richard Ryan, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11084">Devorah Allen</a> 
Mr. Alexis Twisselton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12874">Aaron White</a> 
Mr. Theophilus Bunbury: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
Figgins: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
Spriggins: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
Dick, a Waiter: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11888">Averagemoe</a> 
Mrs. Pimpernel, Mistress of a Boardinghouse: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12823">Pauline Latournerie</a> 
Fanny, her Daughter: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a> 
Miss Thompson, Spriggins's Ward: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a> 
Miss Tomkins, Figgins's Ward: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a> 
Mrs. Twisselton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11084">Devorah Allen</a> 
Maid Servant: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12500">Foon</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13278">KevinS</a> 
 
05. A Dollar by David Pinski, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a> 
The Comedian: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12732">Jim Gallagher</a> 
The Villain: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12874">Aaron White</a> 
The Tragedian: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
The Old Man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11535">Nemo</a> 
The Heroine: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/4174">Availle</a> 
The Ingenue: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a> 
The Old Woman: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13127">Betsy Walker</a> 
The Stranger: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13072">Campbell Schelp</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a> 
 
06. Why the Chimes Rang by Elizabeth Apthorp McFadden, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
Holger - a peasant boy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11535">Nemo</a> 
Steen - his younger brother: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13022">Josh Kibbey</a> 
Bertel - their uncle: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12874">Aaron White</a> 
Old Woman: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13226">Jane Manning</a> 
Angel: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13257">Elsie Selwyn</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
 
07. The Line of No Resistance by Percival Wilde, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13257">Elsie Selwyn</a> 
George Robertson: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
Jean Robertson: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11084">Devorah Allen</a> 
Ethel Quenton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13127">Betsy Walker</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12874">Aaron White</a> 
 
08. Rosencrantz and Guildenstern by W. S. Gilbert: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
King Claudius: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12874">Aaron White</a> 
Queen Gertrude: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a> 
Rosencrantz: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13278">KevinS</a> 
Guildenstern: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
Ophelia: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12500">Foon</a> 
Hamlet: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">alanmapstone</a> 
First Player: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13072">Campbell Schelp</a> 
He: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/167">Peter Yearsley</a> 
She: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10087">Sandra Schmit</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
 
09. First Come, First Served by John Maddison Morton, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6065">David Olson</a> 
Colonel Challenger: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
Harry Barton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6333">Max Körlinge</a> 
Basil Royston: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
Mrs. Templeton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a> 
Julia Templeton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11084">Devorah Allen</a> 
Josephine Templeton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13257">Elsie Selwyn</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6065">David Olson</a> 
 
10. Wanted, A Male Cook by George Melville Baker, Run by: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13257">Elsie Selwyn</a> 
Mr. Heartwell (an old bachelor): <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
Joshua Slocum (from Greensville, Maine): <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
Teddy Ryan (a native of Ireland): <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a> 
François (a French cook): <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12823">Pauline Latournerie</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6333">Max Körlinge</a>

Thanks, Todd

lymiewithpurpose · October 10th, 2019, 10:47 am

I can PL the remaining play!

Post by **Kitty** » October 10th, 2019, 11:24 am

lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑October 10th, 2019, 10:47 am I can PL the remaining play!

thank you so much, Campbell.

This project is so close to completion now.

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » October 10th, 2019, 11:33 am

Great.

Thanks, Todd

lymiewithpurpose · Post by **lymiewithpurpose** » October 11th, 2019, 7:57 pm

The Line of No Resistance is PL OK! Jean certainly handled that situation cleverly.