excellent job on Cordatus, he's totally no-nonsense and down-to-earth, commenting everything. And wow that was quite a long role, especially with the Prologue. I'm really curious whether we can fit in the Prologue into Act 1 without exceeding the 74 minutes.leanneyauyau wrote: ↑March 11th, 2019, 10:27 am https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_cordatus_prologue_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_cordatus_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_cordatus_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_cordatus_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_cordatus_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_cordatus_5_128kb.mp3
Acts 2, 3 and 5 are already PL ok.
a few small notes for the other 3 acts though:
Prologue:
> at 1:16: “O, that sets the stronger seal on his desert“ – should be stressed on last syllable, like “dessert” – here it means “merit, sth you deserve”
Act 1:
> at 1:40: “Why might he not as well have hated Sordido as him?” – this sentence actually belongs to Mitis and can be cut here
I found it strange that Cordatus would speak two quotes in a row here, so I checked with two different scanned copies and I see there is a line missing in Gutenberg.
https://archive.org/details/everymanoutofhis00jonsuoft/page/n55
https://archive.org/details/workesofbeniamin00jons/page/98
That means I need another line from Alan for Mitis: “Stay Sir: I envy not this Buffoon but I hate him: why might he not as well have hated Sordido as him ?” (I’ll drop Alan a PM so he sees this)
Act 4:
> at 0:43: “that would not credit him upon this volley of oaths“ – I hear “valley” instead of “volley”
> at about 0:53: please insert missing line: “Stay: O, here they come from seal'd and deliver'd.“
thank you !
Sonia