Oh, he definitely wants his colloquial "be"!mightyfelix wrote: ↑November 7th, 2019, 9:59 pm1:01 I'm not sure that this ALL line ("Please," p. 83) ought to be spoken by Mr. Honeyman. It seems that he and Budge and Welcome are on stage during this part, but not interacting with the others. I suspect this means all of the children. Still, best to leave it in and let Todd make that decision during editing, in case I'm reading it wrong.LCaulkins wrote: ↑November 4th, 2019, 9:05 am I've uploaded Mr. Honeyman Act 5
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/crossings_mrhoneyman_05.mp3 (1:58)
1:24 More space for directions after "I never"
1:51 OPTIONAL: Slight change of wording. The line is "He'm a copper-boy, he be." I'm hearing "He'm a copper-boy, he is." The only reason that I mention it is because I think that the wording of Honeyman's lines adds to his character. But if you don't want to re-record this bit, then don't worry about it.
And I will also go ahead and mark Act 3 PL ok.
Here's the corrected file for Honeyman, Act 5:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/crossings_mrhoneyman_05.mp3 (2:03)