OK, well, it was probably an error in the first upload, but it is all here now.
It has been quite a fanciful, disjointed journey, with a charm of its own, and greatly enhanced by your skillful reading. I think you really gave it the touch that it needed.
I must say, though, that i very much dislike dream endings, and dream sequences in stories in general. I always feel cheated by the author as if they are saying, "Aha, fooled you! This was just a dream!" Just tell me up front, and I'm much better, and I can enjoy the dream journey.
Anyway, don't feel bad. It has been an entertaining experience.
But, on to smoother sees, eh?
Oh -- totally PL OK, which is amazing.