COMPLETE[PLAY]A Little Bit of Fluff by Walter W. Ellis - thw

Post by **ToddHW** » May 3rd, 2019, 8:54 am

I made the changes to Act 1 as you suggested. Good suggestions all of them.

However, for

38:27[now 38:22] For the narrator line "Hand over ’phone for a second—then resuming in feminine voice," I agree that the "in feminine voice" isn't really necessary, and I agree with the previous cut to the stage directions about the voice, since Tomas has given us a nice falsetto. However, here it requires you to cut the narrator off mid-sentence, and it sounds very abrupt, as if there's an audio glitch. I think it would be better to leave the whole sentence in.

I decided to cut the entire "then resuming in feminine voice" rather than just the "in feminine voice" as I had done, or leaving everything in as you suggested. I think it works fine this way. Comments?

Act 2 is assembled, need to groom before upload.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 3rd, 2019, 12:22 pm

Sounds great, Todd! Yes, it works even better the way you have it now. So act 1 is PL ok now except for the voice credit. Have you PMed Aleacia about it? She may have forgotten.

TroubleATM · Post by **TroubleATM** » May 3rd, 2019, 1:49 pm

mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 3rd, 2019, 12:22 pm Sounds great, Todd! Yes, it works even better the way you have it now. So act 1 is PL ok now except for the voice credit. Have you PMed Aleacia about it? She may have forgotten.

I sent it to him already.

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 3rd, 2019, 4:02 pm

Oh, yay!

Post by **ToddHW** » May 4th, 2019, 6:28 am

TroubleATM wrote: ↑May 3rd, 2019, 1:49 pm
mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 3rd, 2019, 12:22 pm Sounds great, Todd! Yes, it works even better the way you have it now. So act 1 is PL ok now except for the voice credit. Have you PMed Aleacia about it? She may have forgotten.
I sent it to him already.

Where did you send it? I don't see anything here in the forum about it.

Thanks, Todd

TroubleATM · Post by **TroubleATM** » May 4th, 2019, 12:22 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑May 4th, 2019, 6:28 am
TroubleATM wrote: ↑May 3rd, 2019, 1:49 pm
mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 3rd, 2019, 12:22 pm Sounds great, Todd! Yes, it works even better the way you have it now. So act 1 is PL ok now except for the voice credit. Have you PMed Aleacia about it? She may have forgotten.
I sent it to him already.
Where did you send it? I don't see anything here in the forum about it.

Thanks, Todd

In the private message

Post by **ToddHW** » May 4th, 2019, 4:22 pm

I don't see a link in the PM. Can you resend it here?

Thanks, Todd

TroubleATM · Post by **TroubleATM** » May 4th, 2019, 4:58 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑May 4th, 2019, 4:22 pm I don't see a link in the PM. Can you resend it here?

Thanks, Todd

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_Ursula_3_128kb_2.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » May 5th, 2019, 2:21 pm

Thanks.

Act 2 ready for final PL.

Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 5th, 2019, 9:12 pm

Thanks, Todd, I enjoyed hearing it all together. What a wild ride!

I only have one suggestion to make. It sounds great!

1:21 Cut "John, quickly" here.

And I notice that you've added in the complete voice credit for Ursula, too!

Post by **ToddHW** » May 6th, 2019, 7:28 am

mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 5th, 2019, 9:12 pm Thanks, Todd, I enjoyed hearing it all together. What a wild ride! I only have one suggestion to make. It sounds great!

1:21 Cut "John, quickly" here.

And I notice that you've added in the complete voice credit for Ursula, too!

Change made; ready for spot PL.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 6th, 2019, 9:43 am

Great! Act 2 PL ok.

Jbholland77 · Post by **Jbholland77** » May 6th, 2019, 6:21 pm

Act 3, Stage Directions
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_stagedirections_3_128kb.mp3
27:50

Thanks!

Post by **ToddHW** » May 6th, 2019, 6:53 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 17th, 2019, 3:31 am

I'm so sorry, I hadn't noticed that the last file for stage directions was ready until just now! My apologies.

There's just one thing we need added at the very end, after "End of Act 3," and that is:

"End of A Little Bit of Fluff by Walter W. Ellis."

I don't actually see this in the directions in the first post, but I'm pretty sure that's just an oversight and that we do need it. So it's not your fault at all that you didn't know to include it. Great job!