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I decided to cut the entire "then resuming in feminine voice" rather than just the "in feminine voice" as I had done, or leaving everything in as you suggested. I think it works fine this way. Comments?38:27[now 38:22] For the narrator line "Hand over ’phone for a second—then resuming in feminine voice," I agree that the "in feminine voice" isn't really necessary, and I agree with the previous cut to the stage directions about the voice, since Tomas has given us a nice falsetto. However, here it requires you to cut the narrator off mid-sentence, and it sounds very abrupt, as if there's an audio glitch. I think it would be better to leave the whole sentence in.
Act 2 is assembled, need to groom before upload.
Thanks, Todd