COMPLETE Here and Hereafter by Barry Pain -ck

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » February 17th, 2019, 4:03 pm

ColleenMc wrote: ↑February 14th, 2019, 12:01 pm Section 7 ("The Unfinished Game"):

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hereandhereafter_07_pain_128kb.mp3

25:20

Colleen

Hi Colleen! That was an excellent reading! It is PL OK!

Lynda

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » February 17th, 2019, 4:25 pm

heironymouslex wrote: ↑February 17th, 2019, 11:52 am Hi, Carolin,

Section 12 - The Tower

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hereandhereafter_12_pain_128kb.mp3

19:40

My Best,

Mal

Mal - that also was an excellent reading! It is PL OK too!

Lynda

Post by **ColleenMc** » February 17th, 2019, 7:09 pm

Lmnei wrote: ↑February 17th, 2019, 4:03 pm
ColleenMc wrote: ↑February 14th, 2019, 12:01 pm Section 7 ("The Unfinished Game"):

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hereandhereafter_07_pain_128kb.mp3

25:20

Colleen
Hi Colleen! That was an excellent reading! It is PL OK!

Lynda

Thank you!

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » February 18th, 2019, 10:13 am

Thank you both so much

YouTube · Post by **Darvinia** » February 18th, 2019, 3:49 pm

Uploaded Sections 1 and 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hereandhereafter_01_pain_128kb.mp3
Duration: 33:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hereandhereafter_02_pain_128kb.mp3
Duration: 25:56

This story contains racial slurs and the "n" word. I wanted to give you a heads-up before listening.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » February 19th, 2019, 8:28 am

thank you bev!

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » February 21st, 2019, 12:13 pm

Hi Darvinia

Excellent readings of Section 1 and 2! Your voice is so smooth!

Both are PL OK!

Lynda

YouTube · Post by **Darvinia** » February 21st, 2019, 3:49 pm

Thank you Lynda.

MBPrice · Post by **MBPrice** » February 21st, 2019, 8:08 pm

Here is section 20

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hearandhearafter_20_hasheesh_128kb.mp3 14:13

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » February 22nd, 2019, 9:08 am

Thank you

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » February 22nd, 2019, 10:27 pm

MBPrice wrote: ↑February 21st, 2019, 8:08 pm Here is section 20

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hearandhearafter_20_hasheesh_128kb.mp3 14:13

Hi Michael -

You have a really great voice! It was a pleasure listening to you!

This is a standard PL so I am just looking for things that change the meaning of the text that you recorded. I did want to note though that you do have a habit of adding extra words that are not in the text when you are recording. I am only asking you to remove one as the others would be harder and require more re-recording. In addition, we do need a smidge of time at the beginning and then 5 seconds (plus or minus a second) at the end of the recording. Your recording started and ended with no silence at all. The silence is needed during the compilation of the project after everyone has recorded.

0:18 – missing “one” – you recorded the other part numbers so you also need to say one. You also can say Part one, Part two etc.
10:31 – missing sentence at beginning of paragraph - "The little farce was played out with great success next morning."
12:38 = heard “you are very clever” – text does not include “very” please remove
14:13 - Please add 5 seconds of silence at the end of the recording – this is needed for every Librivox recording.

Lynda

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » February 23rd, 2019, 3:31 am

Thank you lynda!

MBPrice · Post by **MBPrice** » March 1st, 2019, 7:37 pm

Here is section 20 edited

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hearandhearafter_20_hasheesh_128kb.mp3 14:25

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » March 1st, 2019, 11:16 pm

Thank you

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » March 5th, 2019, 1:47 pm

MBPrice wrote: ↑March 1st, 2019, 7:37 pm Here is section 20 edited

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/hearandhearafter_20_hasheesh_128kb.mp3 14:25

Hi there!

This is now PL OK based on the edits that I suggested to you.

Please next time do not add any more silence to the beginning of the recording - you were fine at the .5 to 1 second. Now at 3 seconds it is a little long however it will be fine this time. Please keep it closer to the .5 to 1 second at the beginning and 5 seconds at the end of the recording though

Lynda