[COMPLETE]The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn - philc

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Post by Lmnei » February 14th, 2019, 11:15 am

lomond wrote:
February 14th, 2019, 11:09 am
Greetings -

Just one PL Note for Chapter 24:

Time: 17:57 Text has "Kin any of you gentlemen tell me wher' Mr. Peter Wilks lives?” Reading has a repeat starting "Kin any of you".

Otherwise, ready to go.

Lomond
Here it is back Lomond ready for Spot PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_24_twain_128kb.mp3 - 20:11 - note new time please.

Lynda

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Post by lomond » February 14th, 2019, 11:39 am

Lmnei wrote:
February 14th, 2019, 11:15 am

Here it is back Lomond ready for Spot PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_24_twain_128kb.mp3 - 20:11 - note new time please.

Lynda
Greetings -

That was quick! Spot checked, MW updated.

Lomond

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Post by ej400 » February 14th, 2019, 11:49 am

Edits for Chapter 30:

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_30_twain_128kb.mp3 -9:06

Chapter 30. Edit @ 1:49. Edit @ 6:44. Edit @ 8:21

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Post by ej400 » February 14th, 2019, 2:45 pm

Chapter 26 edits: Edit @ 2:44. Edit @ 5:15. Edit @ 5:18. No edit @ 7:19, or 8:44. I think time and minute kind of mean the same thing though, and it didn't seem like it changed anything to the story. Edit @ 13:50 Edit @ 15:07 Edit @ 15:33 Edit @ 16:00 Edit @ 17:04 Edit @ 19:05 No edit @ 19:43 I didn't hear a stumble or the words "in it" Edit @ 19:56 Edit @ 20:11 I'm going to end up re-reading chapter 29 because the lines and stuff got screwed up and trying to find where the text lines up with the times is going to be very hard.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_26_twain_128kb.mp3 -21:04

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 14th, 2019, 3:46 pm

Thanks, Lomond, Lynda and Elijah. It's fine to rerecord Elijah, I've done that myself.

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 14th, 2019, 4:01 pm

Hi Elijah,

Chapter 1 was extremely well-read, I absolutely loved Miss Watson's voice! It truly reminded me of the exact character she is, a crochety, picky old woman :lol: In other words, her voice fit her character to a tee :clap:

A few notes on it- these are extremely easy fixes and can most likely be corrected in a few minutes:

~3:29- you said 'and', then changed quickly to 'but'
~3:48- I couldn't tell exactly what the words were. Could you please rerecord those few words? Thank you.
~5:57- there was a pause, a couple seconds long
~8:03- paused in the middle of the word 'tried'
~9:07- said 'put on' instead of 'put out'

Again, these are easy fixes and only a few. This isn't a word perfect project :) Chapter 1 was read excellently, and your character voices are so good! You completely bring them to life with the original accents and manner of speaking- it's better than some of my dramatic reading characters! Sometimes I just can't get the voices to sound lifelike enough and with a lot of zeal- you've mastered that, clearly!

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 14th, 2019, 4:58 pm

Hi Elijah,
Chapter 26 was read extremely well. Your character voices are simply outstanding! Amazing...

A few PL notes:

~5:30- said 'can' instead of 'can't'
~5:44- long, three-second pause
~8:07- slight stumble on 'anybody could tell you hain't'- repeated 'you' twice
~12:23- said 'my friend's made up' instead of 'my mind's made up'
~13:07- slight stumble- said 'ther' and then 'they'
~15:08- slight stumble- said 'hadn't been', then said 'hadn't found'
~15:59- said 'flung at our hands'- should be 'flung at our heads'
~17:50- slight stumble- said 'gave' and then 'give in'
~19:32- slight stumble- said 'crammed in, it in

I know it looks like a lot, but it's not that much and they are simple fixes. Great job- I love your character voices!
God bless,
JayKitty

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Post by ej400 » February 14th, 2019, 5:38 pm

JayKitty76 wrote:
February 14th, 2019, 4:58 pm
Hi Elijah,
Chapter 26 was read extremely well. Your character voices are simply outstanding! Amazing...

A few PL notes:

~5:30- said 'can' instead of 'can't'
~5:44- long, three-second pause
~8:07- slight stumble on 'anybody could tell you hain't'- repeated 'you' twice
~12:23- said 'my friend's made up' instead of 'my mind's made up'
~13:07- slight stumble- said 'ther' and then 'they'
~15:08- slight stumble- said 'hadn't been', then said 'hadn't found'
~15:59- said 'flung at our hands'- should be 'flung at our heads'
~17:50- slight stumble- said 'gave' and then 'give in'
~19:32- slight stumble- said 'crammed in, it in

I know it looks like a lot, but it's not that much and they are simple fixes. Great job- I love your character voices!
God bless,
JayKitty
Thank you Jaykitty, I have already fixed the PL notes from lmnei's PL notes. Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed my character impressions :D


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Post by JayKitty76 » February 15th, 2019, 12:04 pm

ej400 wrote:
February 15th, 2019, 9:52 am
Here is a new Chapter 26:

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_29_twain_128kb.mp3 -23:16

Thank you!
Thanks.
Looks like you uploaded chapter 29...did you mean 26 or 29? :wink:

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Post by ej400 » February 15th, 2019, 6:02 pm

:lol: <laughing> 29. I kept getting the two messed up for some reason

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Post by fshort » February 15th, 2019, 8:21 pm

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 16th, 2019, 10:01 am

fshort wrote:
February 15th, 2019, 8:21 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_20_twain_128kb.mp3
duration: 25:55
Thank you!

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 16th, 2019, 10:01 am

ej400 wrote:
February 15th, 2019, 6:02 pm
:lol: <laughing> 29. I kept getting the two messed up for some reason
Me too lol :lol: :lol: <eyeroll>

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Post by ej400 » February 16th, 2019, 9:05 pm

Thank you Jaykitty76! I don't mean to be bossy, and I really don't mean it that way, but can you please edit the MW? It just helps me, because I usually look at my reader page's "reader section details", so I know what I should do next... whether it's editing my recordings with PL notes, or what I should record next.

Thank you
Elijah

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