[COMPLETE] The Tempest by William Shakespeare - kit

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » December 28th, 2018, 3:49 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑December 28th, 2018, 3:47 am here is my final part, Juno. I tried to copy your tune, Tomas, but I gave her more of an alto-tone. Juno always strikes me as the more matronly, so it's fitting she should have a deeper voice than Ceres.

I did not quite manage to make the same reverb, but hopefully it's fitting. If not, I still have my unedited file, you could give me your reverb-numbers and I do the exact same.

This sounds pretty close to my reverb, so no need to change it. Otherwise a great rendition of this small part. I like that you deepened your voice to distinguish from Ariel. And thank you for singing a similar tune; I think it will work very well.

All PL OK!

I guess you're all done, Sonia.

Just PL work and editing left. Now I need to begin recording one of my main characters...

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » December 29th, 2018, 6:35 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_dp_craig_0.mp3 0:51
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_narrator_1_2.mp3 2:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_narrator_2_2.mp3 0:52
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_narrator_4_1.mp3 2:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_narrator_5_1.mp3 3:04

Hopefully all corrected. Sorry about the extra work.

Post by **Kitty** » December 29th, 2018, 7:42 am

Craigos wrote: ↑December 29th, 2018, 6:35 am Hopefully all corrected. Sorry about the extra work.

thank you, Craig, all PL ok now and the dramatis personae are assembled, ready for PL by someone else

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_0_shakespeare_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:11 min.

Sonia

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » December 29th, 2018, 1:38 pm

Yup, all roles are accounted for and in the proper order. Thank you, Sonia!

PL OK!

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » December 30th, 2018, 7:39 pm

The first Prospero scene is ready for PL. The longest scene in the play and he is in it throughout. It clocks in at 21:54.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_prospero_1_2.mp3

Brad

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » December 31st, 2018, 9:56 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_1_1.mp3 0:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_2_1.mp3 2:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_3_3.mp3 1:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_5_1.mp3 3:59

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » December 31st, 2018, 10:06 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_3rdmariner_1_1.mp3 0:32

Post by **Kitty** » January 1st, 2019, 7:19 am

Hamlet wrote: ↑December 30th, 2018, 7:39 pm The first Prospero scene is ready for PL. The longest scene in the play and he is in it throughout. It clocks in at 21:54.

woah ! one of your scenes is longer than all my roles together

What a feat ! Well done, Brad, Prospero sounds regal and competent, but he has a softer side too. Excellently characterized. And almost word-perfect.

I have two small notes to make though:

> at 14:35: repeat: "Go take this shape, And hither come in’t" - is there one version you prefer, then you can cut the other one out

> at 20:13: "and husks wherein the acorn cradled." - you say "within", may be optional

Thanks and I Happy New Year to the whole troupe !

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » January 1st, 2019, 7:41 am

Craigos wrote: ↑December 31st, 2018, 9:56 am https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_1_1.mp3 0:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_2_1.mp3 2:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_3_3.mp3 1:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_5_1.mp3 3:59
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_3rdmariner_1_1.mp3 0:32

and a great performance here as well, Craig

you guys were really busy yesterday. I loved the mariner's screams. This will sound perfectly later on assembled into a mayhem chorus

Alonso has all the composure of a king, although quite despairing when his son's life is at stake. A tragic figure. Well characterized there as well.

Mariner and Scenes 1.1. and 2.1. are already PL ok.

> Act 3.3. is in Stereo for some reason, all the other files were ok in Mono. Could you just re-export in Mono please ?

two small things to correct in Act 5:

> at 2:08: stumble and repeat: "Is she the goddess that hath sever’d us," - "goddess" can be cut once and you said "served" instead of "severed", which is a change of meaning in this case

thanks !

Sonia

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » January 2nd, 2019, 2:12 pm

Prospero scenes. 2_1 is corrected. 3_1, 3_3, and 4_1 are read. I only have 5_1 to go.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_prospero_1_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_prospero_3_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_prospero_3_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_prospero_4_1.mp3

This is probably going to sound like a very silly concern. 4_1 contains the most famous passage I have had to read so far in these Shakespeare projects. I am actually worried that I overacted it if that's even possible.

Let me know how "our revels now are ended" to "We are such stuff as dreams are made on, etc." sounds, please. It begins at 3:48.

Brad

Post by **Kitty** » January 5th, 2019, 11:09 am

thanks Brad !!! you were prolific. Sorry I was absent for two days and had a bit of a backlog in PL jobs. Slowly working it off and need a break for tonight. I will check these tomorrow, promised

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » January 6th, 2019, 2:48 am

Hamlet wrote: ↑January 2nd, 2019, 2:12 pmThis is probably going to sound like a very silly concern. 4_1 contains the most famous passage I have had to read so far in these Shakespeare projects. I am actually worried that I overacted it if that's even possible. Let me know how "our revels now are ended" to "We are such stuff as dreams are made on, etc." sounds, please. It begins at 3:48.

no overacting as far as I'm concernced.

I think it quite fitting that Prospero would say these lines with pathos and emotion. Absolutely well done, all of the scenes. I can mark everything PL ok so far. That leaves you one final long scene.

Sonia

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » January 6th, 2019, 4:03 am

My final scene may have to wait a few days. I seem to be coming down with a cold and it's already affecting my voice a little.

Brad

Post by **Kitty** » January 6th, 2019, 4:15 am

Hamlet wrote: ↑January 6th, 2019, 4:03 am My final scene may have to wait a few days. I seem to be coming down with a cold and it's already affecting my voice a little.

aww, take care of that first. There is no hurry.

Sonia

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » January 7th, 2019, 11:17 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_3_3.mp3 1:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/tempest_alonso_5_1.mp3 3:53

Corrections!