COMPLETE [FORTNIGHTLY POEM] Christmas at Church by Hattie Howard - dl

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » December 10th, 2018, 4:57 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑December 9th, 2018, 9:02 pm Thank you Greg.

You are most welcome, David!

brucek · Post by **brucek** » December 10th, 2018, 8:33 am

Hi David,

Yours is pretty much PL OK except for the fourth line from the end in which I am hearing "In beauteous gratuity" rather than what it should be "In bounteous gratuity". This, in my opinion, is not a big deal and were you to leave it as is, it would be fine with me.

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Bruce.

Post by **aradlaw** » December 10th, 2018, 7:12 pm

Thanks for the PL Bruce, edit is uploaded.

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » December 11th, 2018, 5:42 am

Hi there!
Here is my reading:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/christmasatchurch_howard_sh_128kb.mp3
Time: 1:52

brucek · Post by **brucek** » December 11th, 2018, 8:48 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑December 10th, 2018, 7:12 pm Thanks for the PL Bruce, edit is uploaded.

Forgive me, David, I should have caught this yesterday, but at 1:09 (the first line of stanza 5) I hear "At once" for "As once". Your choice my friend, otherwise your previous edit is great.

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Bruce.

Post by **aradlaw** » December 11th, 2018, 10:13 am

Thank you SweetHome, good reading, but the volume is low at 86 dB, could you please amplify by +2 and upload ?

Post by **aradlaw** » December 11th, 2018, 10:27 am

brucek wrote: ↑December 11th, 2018, 8:48 am
Forgive me, David....
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Bruce.

Thank you for your perseverance Bruce, an edited version is uploaded.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/christmasatchurch_howard_dl_128kb.mp3
2:05

SweetHome · Post by **SweetHome** » December 11th, 2018, 12:27 pm

Upped the volume as requested!
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/christmasatchurch_howard_sh_128kb.mp3

Post by **aradlaw** » December 11th, 2018, 3:32 pm

Thank you for the edit SweetHome.

brucek · Post by **brucek** » December 11th, 2018, 8:32 pm

aradlaw wrote: ↑December 11th, 2018, 10:27 am
brucek wrote: ↑December 11th, 2018, 8:48 am
Forgive me, David....
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Bruce.
Thank you for your perseverance Bruce, an edited version is uploaded.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/christmasatchurch_howard_dl_128kb.mp3
2:05

Sounds great, David, PL OK.

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Bruce.

Post by **aradlaw** » December 16th, 2018, 8:42 am

Thanks Bruce, and thank you to all the readers of this Fortnightly.

This project is now closed, please join our next group of Weekly/Fortnightly Poetry projects...
A Merry Christmas : two early birds by Anonymous and Santa Claus, Kriss Kringle or St. NIcholas by Anonymous

This project is now complete!
All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/christmas-at-church-by-hattie-howard/