COMPLETE [Grp Language] An Essay Concerning Human Understanding Book III Of Words by John Locke-ag

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Post by SaraHale » May 18th, 2019, 8:31 am

abestone wrote:
May 16th, 2019, 5:56 am
Well, I've been enjoying LV as a listener for years. Glad to finally contribute a little.

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Same here! I hope you'll enjoy recording even more. Have a great day! :D
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Post by Ellaqyint » May 19th, 2019, 11:07 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/humanunderstandingvol3_16_locke_128kb.mp3

section 16: 22min 2.712sec

If it sucks, this is my first time so criticism wont make me cry. Let me know if i messed up in the loading or anything :D
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Post by soupy » May 19th, 2019, 12:35 pm

Hi Ellaqyint :D
You read section 14 Chapter XI Of The Remedies Of The Foregoing Imperfections And Abuses Of Words Part One

We don't have a section 16 in our collection.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/humanunderstandingvol3_16_locke_128kb.mp3

Can you reload the file and make it section 14 where the number 16 is?

Sarah will be along to comment on the reading.
Your voice sounds good.

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Post by Ellaqyint » May 19th, 2019, 1:13 pm

Roger that
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Post by Ellaqyint » May 19th, 2019, 1:19 pm

She plays in the background,
I live in the world.
We meet in the mirror and confront the harshness of the elements on my side,
immortal innocence on hers.

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Post by SaraHale » May 19th, 2019, 1:27 pm

Hey Ellaqyint,
I've listened to your one-minute test and you have a beautiful voice. And I can't wait to listen to this recording. :9:

But the file name is still wrong. Don't worry about it, I'm sure the next time it'll be correct. Third time's a charm. :D

The file name should be like this humanunderstandingvol3_14_locke_128kb.mp3
humanunderstandingvol3_##_locke_128kb.mp3(all lower-case) where ## is the section number (e.g. humanunderstandingvol3_01_locke_128kb.mp3)
Talk to you very soon!!! Have an AWESOME day.
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Post by Ellaqyint » May 19th, 2019, 1:36 pm

:lol: thanks for your patience
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Post by SaraHale » May 19th, 2019, 1:38 pm

Ellaqyint wrote:
May 19th, 2019, 1:36 pm
:lol: thanks for your patience
Don't worry about it. :thumbs:
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Post by Ellaqyint » May 20th, 2019, 8:21 am


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Post by soupy » May 20th, 2019, 2:37 pm

That's the way it should be Ellaqyint :thumbs:

Thanks. Your voice still sounds great :D

It's in the Magic Window for proof listening.

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Post by alg1001 » May 20th, 2019, 7:06 pm

I just noticed you are 100% subscribed. I'll move you to Readers Found.
I will be "Out of the Office" until Monday and will catch up with everything then. Peace be with you all.

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Post by soupy » May 21st, 2019, 3:53 am

Thanks
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Post by Ellaqyint » May 21st, 2019, 6:10 pm

She plays in the background,
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We meet in the mirror and confront the harshness of the elements on my side,
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Post by soupy » May 21st, 2019, 6:33 pm

Thanks Ellaqyint :thumbs:

Ready for PL.

Thanks Craig
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Post by SaraHale » May 25th, 2019, 11:54 am

Hey Ellaqyint,

Sorry for taking so long to PL your sections. :(

I have to tell you; you did an AWESOME job with the narration. I liked your reading pace. Well Done! :clap:

I have tiny PL notes: (Obligatory ones are first. Optional ones are second (more like personal PL notes. So feel free to disagree/not to fix them).

Before we start, it's very important to edit backwardly so the timestamps that I give you will still be correct for you to find them.

Section 14:
Obligatory Notes:
@00m:01s
I hear section 16 instead of section 14.

@00m:27s
Missed "part one"
"Say: "[Title in MW]...."
Chapter XI Of The Remedies Of The Foregoing Imperfections And Abuses Of Words Part One

@21:56.0
I hear "End of part 1" instead of "end of Section 14".

Please fix those.

Optional ones (feel free to disagree/not to fix them)

@11:55.0
There is a "ha" sound.

Section 15:
Obligatory Notes:
@00m:00.8s
You've missed
Section 15 of An Essay Concerning Human Understanding Book III Of Words by John Locke This is a LibriVox recording. All LibriVox recordings are in the public domain. For more information, or to volunteer, please visit: librivox DOT org

Chapter XI Of The Remedies Of The Foregoing Imperfections And Abuses Of Words Part Two
@18:24.5
I hear "Section 16" instead of "Section 15".

Missed
At the end of the book, say (in addition):
"End of An Essay Concerning Human Understanding Book III Of Words by John Locke"

Please fix those.

Optional ones: (feel free to disagree/not to fix them)

@4:29
united in the same subject, as to signify any other combination;
I hear "by" instead of "any"

@9:19.5
yet they leave them not without
I hear "if" instead of "yet".

@13:18.5
This yet is not usually done
I hear "And" instead of "This"

I hope that I can get the chance to PL your future recordings. :9:
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks, SaraHale. :D

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