(SOLO) Mark Twain- A Biography by Albert Bigelow Paine- Volume III - dlo

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14 & 15 are done
"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!
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sect 14
PL OK

sect 15
PL note: word change

00:18 The ''Christian'' number of ...s/b ''Christmas''
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HZFerr wrote: December 9th, 2018, 1:03 pm
sect 15
PL note: word change

00:18 The ''Christian'' number of ...s/b ''Christmas''
15 corrected
&
16 is done
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sect 15

spot PL OK :thumbs:
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17&18 are done
"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!
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sect 16
PL note: extra word

18:17 The doctor & a specialist met ''me'' in conspiracy five...remove the word "me"
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sect 17 & 18
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16 is corrected
and
19 is done
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20 is done
note: "22" months instead of "as" months!!

this was a tough chapter!!!
:-(
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21 & 22 are done
"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!
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sect 16
spot PL OK :thumbs:
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sect 19
PL OK
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Hi John,
I am so sorry having to do this, finding an error in this section feels unconscionable. :(
This section will bring tears to all that hear it. :cry:
sect 20
07:09 I bent over her & looked ''her in the'' face...s/b looked ''in her'' face
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HZFerr wrote: December 15th, 2018, 9:36 am Hi John,
I am so sorry having to do this, finding an error in this section feels unconscionable. :(
This section will bring tears to all that hear it. :cry:
sect 20
07:09 I bent over her & looked ''her in the'' face...s/b looked ''in her'' face
sad indeed!!
:(
20 is corrected
23 is done- note ending has reference to Project Gutenberg editor "DW"
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sect 20
spot PL OK

Beautifully read! (I bent over her & looked in her face) Perfect amount of feeling conveyed! :clap:
Helen

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