iBeScotty wrote: ↑March 20th, 2019, 1:11 pmThe last of Pinchwife uploaded. Thanks so much for letting me play, it was a hoot!
yes I noticed you had a fun time with this one. And the final act is really a great ending to it all. I love the many laughs you insert and the well-placed "blowing out the candle" These little things make it all so lively.
The final act is also PL ok. Magnificent job all throughout, Scott !
ahhh, your voice has such a high pitch here, didn't see that one coming sounds excellent for Lucy's character though. And I love the laughs at the beginning. Well done, TJ.
You did miss two lines though
> at about 0:33: please insert: “Stay, stay, hold—“ and “For God's sake, sir, I must follow 'em.”
thank you, good start, looking forward to the rest. I hope the voice is not too difficult to keep up throughout.
Sonia
Oh no, I got sloppy. This is the first time I've cut out my sections and pasted them into a separate document. It wasn't so successful, I see. Now I'm going to get slack from my colleagues down at the recording studio, who call me "PL-Okay TeeJay"... (and by "recording studio" I mean my home office, and by "colleagues" I mean my 11-year-old daughter, Jasmin ). Okay, I'll get the revised version to you ASAP, along with the other two acts.
another great act, Tomas. Excellent assembling again, I have nothing to note down here. Immediately PL ok. Now the plot starts to be fully of double-entendres.
benderca wrote: ↑March 23rd, 2019, 11:10 am
Ooooh nooo! Am I the weak link again?
I would not say "weak" link, but only a "late" link no matter, better late than never and the saying goes "last but not least". Someone has to be the last
And thanks for starting with Act 5, so this one can get assembled already. Yes it's all PL ok and Lucy is so endearingly witty and scheming. I love the final nudge to Mrs Pinchwife, "was it not so" ? sooo full of insistent meaning in your voice. Well done
ahhh, your voice has such a high pitch here, didn't see that one coming sounds excellent for Lucy's character though. And I love the laughs at the beginning. Well done, TJ.
You did miss two lines though
> at about 0:33: please insert: “Stay, stay, hold—“ and “For God's sake, sir, I must follow 'em.”
thank you, good start, looking forward to the rest. I hope the voice is not too difficult to keep up throughout.
Sonia
Thanks, Sonia! The British accent is hard for me to keep up, but luckily I don't have that many lines...
The missing lines were inserted at 35.00 and 42.00
benderca wrote: ↑March 24th, 2019, 8:58 amThanks, Sonia! The British accent is hard for me to keep up, but luckily I don't have that many lines...
The missing lines were inserted at 35.00 and 42.00
thank you, perfectly PL ok now and Act 3 is ready to be assembled !!!! Tomas is kept busy
I'm missing a line from Mrs. Dainty Fidget in Act 5, incorrectly labeled Mrs. Fain in the script: "Dear brimmer! Well, in token of our openness and plain-dealing, let us throw our masks over our heads."
A new file is okay instead of re-uploading the old one.
WiltedScribe wrote: ↑March 26th, 2019, 1:22 am
I'm missing a line from Mrs. Dainty Fidget in Act 5, incorrectly labeled Mrs. Fain in the script: "Dear brimmer! Well, in token of our openness and plain-dealing, let us throw our masks over our heads."
A new file is okay instead of re-uploading the old one.
These little things make it all so lively.
yes I think that was his main vocabulary in this play. Talk about obsession. 
Everyone sounds sooooo good. 