COMPLETE From Queen's Gardens - A Chorus of Many Voices by Various -ck

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 4th, 2018, 11:55 pm

Thank you all!

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 5th, 2018, 12:02 am

Hi lynda,

Sorry i didnt post about the double claim yesterday. It happens rather often that you visit athread in which a claim has been posted but was not yet entered into the magic window - even bcs have to sleep haha. I expect (experienced) readers to realise this and to read the last few posts in a project to take them into account.

In poetry, this is not a big problem as all doubles can be submitted to the short poetry collection, but in books this is very important. You can find the current short poetry collection in readers wanted. Thank you!

Foon · Post by **Foon** » September 6th, 2018, 5:27 am

Kirsten,
Section 1 is PL OK--what a beautiful poem

Foon · Post by **Foon** » September 6th, 2018, 5:29 am

Lynda,

Section 16 PL note:
0:03 I hear "Mrs. Hermans" whereas the poem is written by Mrs. Hemans.

Carolin, this is a typo in the MW, might be worth fixing the author?

Sections 13, 14, 15, 17 all PL OK

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 6th, 2018, 7:48 am

Carolin wrote: ↑September 5th, 2018, 12:02 am Hi lynda,

Sorry i didnt post about the double claim yesterday. It happens rather often that you visit athread in which a claim has been posted but was not yet entered into the magic window - even bcs have to sleep haha. I expect (experienced) readers to realise this and to read the last few posts in a project to take them into account.

In poetry, this is not a big problem as all doubles can be submitted to the short poetry collection, but in books this is very important. You can find the current short poetry collection in readers wanted. Thank you!

It was not a problem Carolin - first time I have made that mistake! Now the Short Poetry benefits

Lynda

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 6th, 2018, 12:13 pm

Foon wrote: ↑September 6th, 2018, 5:29 am Lynda,

Section 16 PL note:
0:03 I hear "Mrs. Hermans" whereas the poem is written by Mrs. Hemans.

Carolin, this is a typo in the MW, might be worth fixing the author?

Sections 13, 14, 15, 17 all PL OK

Here is Section 16 back Foon - good catch!

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_16_various_128kb.mp3 - 1:57

Lynda

Foon · Post by **Foon** » September 6th, 2018, 12:22 pm

Thanks Lynda, all good now

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 10th, 2018, 1:52 am

Thank you all

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 10th, 2018, 11:34 am

Good morning Carolin!

Here are more of my poems -

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_18_various_128kb.mp3 - 2:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_19_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:52
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_20_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_21_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:59
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_22_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:43
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_23_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:51
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_24_various_128kb.mp3 - 1:35

I think I have posted these in the right spot this time

Lynda

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 10th, 2018, 11:12 pm

Thank you

Foon · Post by **Foon** » September 11th, 2018, 5:42 am

Hi Lynda,

Poems 19, 20, 22, 23, 24 are all PL OK

PL notes:

18
0:42 I think here the word "fir'd" should be pronounced as "fired", or at least the fir part of it--to keep the rhyme with "inspir'd"

21.
0:03 I hear "Anna W. Waring" whereas the author Anna L. Waring

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 13th, 2018, 7:56 am

Thank you foon!

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 15th, 2018, 10:23 pm

Foon wrote: ↑September 11th, 2018, 5:42 am Hi Lynda,

Poems 19, 20, 22, 23, 24 are all PL OK

PL notes:

18
0:42 I think here the word "fir'd" should be pronounced as "fired", or at least the fir part of it--to keep the rhyme with "inspir'd"

21.
0:03 I hear "Anna W. Waring" whereas the author Anna L. Waring

Hi Foon!

Here are my corrected Sections from above -

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_18_various_128kb.mp3 - 2:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_21_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:59

Lynda

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 16th, 2018, 10:54 pm

Thank you

Foon · Post by **Foon** » September 17th, 2018, 6:22 am

Lmnei wrote: ↑September 15th, 2018, 10:23 pm
Hi Foon!

Here are my corrected Sections from above -

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_18_various_128kb.mp3 - 2:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_21_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:59

Lynda

Thanks Lynda, both PL OK!