Beautiful reading! It was a pleasure to listen to!
I have no notes on the reading itself, however, the volume checked in at 85.5dB. This is just outside of the accepted range of 86-92dB. Could you amplify the recording and reupload?
0:20 repeat intro ("Certain personal matters ...")
1:34 weissnichtwo - this is a joke in German, weiss nicht wo, meaning "don't know where". Up to you if you want to change the pronunciation.
8:31 the words "in the wide firmament of face" are omitted
9:09 I hear "Why not, then" where the text reads "Why, then"
End of section: repeat of "Chapter 23", and please include 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Otherwise, nicely read, and with these changes, it will make for an excellent section!
0:20 repeat intro ("Certain personal matters ...")
1:34 weissnichtwo - this is a joke in German, weiss nicht wo, meaning "don't know where". Up to you if you want to change the pronunciation.
8:31 the words "in the wide firmament of face" are omitted
9:09 I hear "Why not, then" where the text reads "Why, then"
End of section: repeat of "Chapter 23", and please include 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Otherwise, nicely read, and with these changes, it will make for an excellent section!
Thanks so much!
I just couldn't get my laptop set up late last night.
I do have my four sections recorded, so I may get them edited this week after hours.
Now off for some snorkeling.
Whooooops - I already spotted a deliberate mistake !! haha just goes to show I need more practice - this file has the prefixes and suffixes on it - I hope !
keirbear wrote: ↑August 13th, 2018, 2:56 am
Whooooops - I already spotted a deliberate mistake !! haha just goes to show I need more practice - this file has the prefixes and suffixes on it - I hope !
keirbear wrote: ↑August 13th, 2018, 2:56 am
Whooooops - I already spotted a deliberate mistake !! haha just goes to show I need more practice - this file has the prefixes and suffixes on it - I hope !