wonderful poem narrative, Dave
and this was a long poem
great job you did on that one.
It's true that at least with my earphones I hear some
background hum which disturbed me a bit. I let the noise-cleaning function in Audacity run once more over it and then the sound was much better. Did you use this function (do you have Audacity ?).
I only found two minor textual errors, but they don't really change any meaning, so this is optional if you want to Spot correct those:
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at 1:03: p. 268: "by favour of his
goddess mother, Venus" - you left out "goddess", but we all know that Venus is a goddess, so this is redundant
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at 12:05: p. 276: "who,
driven from out his fatherland" - forgot "driven", but it doesn't change the meaning much
I mark it
PL ok and let you decide if you want to reupload.
Thank you ! And I hope I see you in the upcoming books from this series as well
For the moment this one is fully claimed, but you never know, there may be orphans, so stay tuned
Sonia