[COMPLETE] The Two-Gun Man by Charles A Seltzer - dc

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » July 16th, 2018, 5:09 pm

Tom:

Chapter 16 is PL-OK! (Thinking hormonally will make idiots out of most men).

Chapter 17: two small corrections

At 3:22 I heard "only enough" : I expected "only long enough"

10:29 there's an extra "very" in the phrase "I'm sure you would"

We got the hero, the girl, the villain, the corpse in waiting--alas poor Ben

Many thanks,

Philip

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 23rd, 2018, 11:38 am

Chapter 17 ready for spot PL.
Chapter 18 ready for PL.

My wife says the brains (such as there are) in the Radford family obviously went to the womenfolk.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » July 23rd, 2018, 8:44 pm

Tom:

Section 17 is now PL-OK. Section 18 at 13:24 the word "rein" is missing from after the word "bridle."

Here's a thought--why don't you and Mrs. P find one of these and do it together. You could do the men; she could do the women, split the narration down the middle. You'd need an editor and a DPL...but I think I know where those can be found without too much difficulty. (And, lest we forget, an MC, too).

I see the blue shadows are deepening on the trail...must be getting towards the end. I enjoyed your reading, as always.

Many thanks,

Philip

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 24th, 2018, 6:50 pm

Section 18 ready for spot PL.

I had the same idea but she isn't interested. Maybe some day I can get her to do a one liner or something and take it from there.

Thanks for listening. I have 19 and 20 in post production. Won't be long now.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » July 28th, 2018, 1:40 pm

Sections 19 and 20 ready for PL.

Looks like it's time for Ferguson to make his move.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » July 28th, 2018, 2:37 pm

Tom:

18-20 PL-OK. Very nicely read. I think the plot may well be as thick as its going to get.

Many thanks,

Philip

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » August 1st, 2018, 12:09 pm

chapters 21 and 22 ready for PL.

Finally, he makes his move. Now how can he get the girl?

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » August 3rd, 2018, 8:48 am

Tom:

Section 21 & 22 PL-OK.

Just a few loose ends left to tie up........

Many thanks,

Philip

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » August 4th, 2018, 12:45 pm

Sections 23 and 24 are ready for PL.

Thanks, Philip, for being such a careful listener.

Post by **craigdav1** » August 4th, 2018, 1:00 pm

The Project Screen now has your updated book summary.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » August 4th, 2018, 2:02 pm

Tom:

You are finished. Sections 23 & 24 are PL-OK!

It's always a privilege to work with you.

Many thanks,

Philip

Post by **craigdav1** » August 4th, 2018, 2:21 pm

Will catalog this tonight or tomorrow morning at the latest.

Penumbra · Post by **Penumbra** » August 4th, 2018, 2:22 pm

Thank you both for your help.

Time to pick my next project.

Post by **craigdav1** » August 4th, 2018, 5:11 pm

All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/the-two-gun-man-by-charles-alden-seltzer/

Let me know if any changes are needed.