[COMPLETE] The Two-Gun Man by Charles A Seltzer - dc
Tom:
Chapter 16 is PL-OK! (Thinking hormonally will make idiots out of most men).
Chapter 17: two small corrections
At 3:22 I heard "only enough" : I expected "only long enough"
10:29 there's an extra "very" in the phrase "I'm sure you would"
We got the hero, the girl, the villain, the corpse in waiting--alas poor Ben
Many thanks,
Philip
Chapter 16 is PL-OK! (Thinking hormonally will make idiots out of most men).
Chapter 17: two small corrections
At 3:22 I heard "only enough" : I expected "only long enough"
10:29 there's an extra "very" in the phrase "I'm sure you would"
We got the hero, the girl, the villain, the corpse in waiting--alas poor Ben
Many thanks,
Philip
Back after 8/15. In the hands of the medicos.
Tom:
Section 17 is now PL-OK. Section 18 at 13:24 the word "rein" is missing from after the word "bridle."
Here's a thought--why don't you and Mrs. P find one of these and do it together. You could do the men; she could do the women, split the narration down the middle. You'd need an editor and a DPL...but I think I know where those can be found without too much difficulty. (And, lest we forget, an MC, too).
I see the blue shadows are deepening on the trail...must be getting towards the end. I enjoyed your reading, as always.
Many thanks,
Philip
Section 17 is now PL-OK. Section 18 at 13:24 the word "rein" is missing from after the word "bridle."
Here's a thought--why don't you and Mrs. P find one of these and do it together. You could do the men; she could do the women, split the narration down the middle. You'd need an editor and a DPL...but I think I know where those can be found without too much difficulty. (And, lest we forget, an MC, too).
I see the blue shadows are deepening on the trail...must be getting towards the end. I enjoyed your reading, as always.
Many thanks,
Philip
Back after 8/15. In the hands of the medicos.
Section 18 ready for spot PL.
I had the same idea but she isn't interested. Maybe some day I can get her to do a one liner or something and take it from there.
Thanks for listening. I have 19 and 20 in post production. Won't be long now.
I had the same idea but she isn't interested. Maybe some day I can get her to do a one liner or something and take it from there.
Thanks for listening. I have 19 and 20 in post production. Won't be long now.
Tom Penn
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Let me know if any changes are needed.
Let me know if any changes are needed.