COMPLETE[PLAY] The Dream by Joanna Baillie - thw
Thanks, Sonia. I'll add that line. No, no scratchy throat -- actually I'm in the best of health, which means my voice can go higher (and lower). Summer and sunshine are great for my vocal chords!Kitty wrote: ↑June 9th, 2018, 4:53 amwonderful job, TJ !!! I love the sort of raspy voice the brother has (I hope it doesn't mean you have a scratchy throat ) But it's a great effect. And the trepidation when he recounts his visions is really well acted out.benderca wrote: ↑June 8th, 2018, 4:28 pm Here's Paul, Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_paul_1_128kb.mp3
Only one missing line need to be inserted:
> at about 1:12: missing line (p. 107): (calling to those without): "Ho there ! What is the matter ?"
thanks !
Sonia
Here's Paul, Act 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_paul_2_128kb.mp3
Did you happen to notice any lines for Paul or Omnes in Chapter 3 while you were PLing? I think he may just be a prop (a good-looking one, though not too heroic -- afraid of catching a little plague... disgraceful).
TJ - I'm back in the game!
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TJ's Projects ll Golden Road ll Great Gatsby ll Passage to India l l Valley of Fear ll Christopher Junior ll
Thanks for signing up, adr6090!adr6090 wrote: ↑June 14th, 2018, 12:27 pm Yes, the second executioner is the one I meant & thank you for signing me up for both of the roles I had mentioned.
PROJECTS
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
I mean... I can't blame him. I wouldn't want to catch the plague either.benderca wrote: ↑June 14th, 2018, 12:36 pmThanks, Sonia. I'll add that line. No, no scratchy throat -- actually I'm in the best of health, which means my voice can go higher (and lower). Summer and sunshine are great for my vocal chords!Kitty wrote: ↑June 9th, 2018, 4:53 amwonderful job, TJ !!! I love the sort of raspy voice the brother has (I hope it doesn't mean you have a scratchy throat ) But it's a great effect. And the trepidation when he recounts his visions is really well acted out.benderca wrote: ↑June 8th, 2018, 4:28 pm Here's Paul, Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_paul_1_128kb.mp3
Only one missing line need to be inserted:
> at about 1:12: missing line (p. 107): (calling to those without): "Ho there ! What is the matter ?"
thanks !
Sonia
Here's Paul, Act 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_paul_2_128kb.mp3
Did you happen to notice any lines for Paul or Omnes in Chapter 3 while you were PLing? I think he may just be a prop (a good-looking one, though not too heroic -- afraid of catching a little plague... disgraceful).
And, um... I think I messed up. I couldn't find any lines either. Sorry.
PROJECTS
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
Thanks, Sonia!Kitty wrote: ↑June 9th, 2018, 4:53 am wonderful job, TJ !!! I love the sort of raspy voice the brother has (I hope it doesn't mean you have a scratchy throat ) But it's a great effect. And the trepidation when he recounts his visions is really well acted out.
Only one missing line need to be inserted:
> at about 1:12: missing line (p. 107): (calling to those without): "Ho there ! What is the matter ?"
thanks !
Sonia
Now I have a scratchy voice. I just read a 14-page story from your World's Story project. Then I tried to Paul again and couldn't get down so low. I guess I need to rest my voice...
I added the missing line at about 1:12. Hope it's paulish enough:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_paul_1_128kb.mp3
TJ - I'm back in the game!
TJ's Projects ll Golden Road ll Great Gatsby ll Passage to India l l Valley of Fear ll Christopher Junior ll
TJ's Projects ll Golden Road ll Great Gatsby ll Passage to India l l Valley of Fear ll Christopher Junior ll
oh I'm sorry the section was bad for your voice. 14 pages in one go is a lot, I also prefer smaller sections.
Well the good news is that Paul is PL ok now Thanks
Sonia
I wasn't planning to read it in one go, but it was just too good to stop -- it was the music of the desert story.
Yay!!!
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TJ's Projects ll Golden Road ll Great Gatsby ll Passage to India l l Valley of Fear ll Christopher Junior ll
TJ's Projects ll Golden Road ll Great Gatsby ll Passage to India l l Valley of Fear ll Christopher Junior ll
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Well, doing my final edit, I found several missing lines in Act I, and in Act II, the longest, I found just one missed word, but its omission reverses the meaning of the sentence, so I need to do all of these corrections. Act III I believe to be correct, so I'm submitting it now:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_prior_3_128kb.mp3
I don't know if I put enough expression into this vengeful prior, but hope some of his darkness came through.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_prior_3_128kb.mp3
I don't know if I put enough expression into this vengeful prior, but hope some of his darkness came through.
~ Larry
NOTE: Traveling without internet until March 17
NOTE: Traveling without internet until March 17
Looking forward to your evil side, Larry I will PL tomorrow morning ! Thanks, for now I'll update MW, so I won't forgetsilverquill wrote: ↑June 18th, 2018, 9:30 am I don't know if I put enough expression into this vengeful prior, but hope some of his darkness came through.
Sonia
Thanks Larry!silverquill wrote: ↑June 18th, 2018, 9:30 am Well, doing my final edit, I found several missing lines in Act I, and in Act II, the longest, I found just one missed word, but its omission reverses the meaning of the sentence, so I need to do all of these corrections. Act III I believe to be correct, so I'm submitting it now:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_prior_3_128kb.mp3
I don't know if I put enough expression into this vengeful prior, but hope some of his darkness came through.
PROJECTS
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
The roles of Jerome and Morand have both been vacated.
I wasn't intending on taking a role for this one, but I think I'd better to get this done in the not-too-distant future. So I'm claiming the role of Jerome.
The role of Morand, meanwhile, is now available. (And again -- gender neutral casting.)
I wasn't intending on taking a role for this one, but I think I'd better to get this done in the not-too-distant future. So I'm claiming the role of Jerome.
The role of Morand, meanwhile, is now available. (And again -- gender neutral casting.)
PROJECTS
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
oh I do think that you have a certain vindictive undertone in your voice here, Larry. The evil side does shine through I liked the performance.silverquill wrote: ↑June 18th, 2018, 9:30 am Act III I believe to be correct, so I'm submitting it now:
I don't know if I put enough expression into this vengeful prior, but hope some of his darkness came through.
there is only one line missing:
> at about 1:36: (p. 167) missing line: “Then give the stroke without it” (ahhh, what a mean, vindictive person ! Wanting to hurry up the process so no help would be able to come in time)
Sonia
Just a quick question: Is Paul, Act 2 PL ok? Just wondering because it hasn't been moved yet in the MW and I thought it might have been overlooked...
TJ - I'm back in the game!
TJ's Projects ll Golden Road ll Great Gatsby ll Passage to India l l Valley of Fear ll Christopher Junior ll
TJ's Projects ll Golden Road ll Great Gatsby ll Passage to India l l Valley of Fear ll Christopher Junior ll
ok I found the link. Somehow it got lost in the action, but all's fine and it's PL ok. He's a bit of a whimp at the end nice contrast to the gruffer macho voice he had throughout the play.benderca wrote: ↑June 14th, 2018, 12:36 pm Here's Paul, Act 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/dream_paul_2_128kb.mp3
Did you happen to notice any lines for Paul or Omnes in Chapter 3 while you were PLing? I think he may just be a prop (a good-looking one, though not too heroic -- afraid of catching a little plague... disgraceful).
And I checked Act 3, indeed he seems to have no speaking lines, not even Omnes. He's just there to prop up the prisoner to the scaffold and then he can leave again
Thanks, TJ !
Sonia