COMPLETE The Texan Star by Joseph Altsheler-mas

Post by **linny** » February 27th, 2018, 6:02 am

I took a look at 3 and 4. I strongly suggest working out the technical aspects from 1 before you continue on. Both of these chapters are still showing the DC offset. Both should be noise cleaned and please double check your opening and ending silences. On 3 your opening silence is almost 2 seconds and ending is 6 seconds. On 4 opening is fine but ending is 9 seconds.

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » February 27th, 2018, 7:18 am

linny wrote: ↑
February 27th, 2018, 5:45 am
Since it's 4 seconds I would say it's ok but do try to get closer to 5 in the future. If it was 3.5 I'd say it should be corrected but 4 should be pretty safe.

Alrighty, thank you.

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » March 1st, 2018, 10:42 am

Here is chapter 5:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_05_altsheler_128kb.mp3

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » March 1st, 2018, 10:07 pm

I got all the clicks and buzzes out of my recordings, and here they are:

Chapter 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3

Chapter 3: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_03_altsheler_128kb.mp3

Chapter 4: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_04_altsheler_128kb.mp3

Hope you like them!

Post by **linny** » March 2nd, 2018, 6:58 am

linny wrote: ↑
February 26th, 2018, 6:09 am
PL notes for Chapter 1
0:27 distortion – They could see through the narrow window

11:22 small stumble on inhabitants (you should just be able to clip this out)

21:07 distortion – Their quarters were commodious

These corrections are still needed.

Post by **linny** » March 2nd, 2018, 7:01 am

Visually 3 and 4 look good. However you are processing now chapter 5 could use it as well.

Other than chapter 1, I'll leave the others for your DPL. I really just wanted to work through the technical with you.

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » March 2nd, 2018, 7:07 am

linny wrote: ↑
March 2nd, 2018, 7:01 am
Visually 3 and 4 look good. However you are processing now chapter 5 could use it as well.

Other than chapter 1, I'll leave the others for your DPL. I really just wanted to work through the technical with you.

Oh, right. I forgot to do that to 1. Should have that done by tonight.

Post by **linny** » March 2nd, 2018, 10:57 am

3 and 4 are not PL OK. I didn't PL them, I just reviewed them for technical.

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » March 2nd, 2018, 11:44 am

Oh dang, I'm sorry. Let me revert that.

Here is Chapter 1...again... You might want to check out the 21:07 bit again, I couldn't fix it, so I just re-recorded it. I hope it is fine.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3

Post by **linny** » March 3rd, 2018, 8:36 am

Edmonds wrote: ↑
March 2nd, 2018, 11:44 am
Oh dang, I'm sorry. Let me revert that.

Here is Chapter 1...again... You might want to check out the 21:07 bit again, I couldn't fix it, so I just re-recorded it. I hope it is fine.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3

The first two corrections are fine.
For this third correction you left in a click which sounds like your mic being turned off. You'll want to remove that.

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » March 3rd, 2018, 10:34 am

linny wrote: ↑
March 3rd, 2018, 8:36 am

Edmonds wrote: ↑
March 2nd, 2018, 11:44 am
Oh dang, I'm sorry. Let me revert that.

Here is Chapter 1...again... You might want to check out the 21:07 bit again, I couldn't fix it, so I just re-recorded it. I hope it is fine.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3
The first two corrections are fine.
For this third correction you left in a click which sounds like your mic being turned off. You'll want to remove that.

I'LL GET IT RIGHT SOMETIME

Chapter 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_01_altsheler_128kb.mp3

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » March 4th, 2018, 4:11 pm

Chapter 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/texanstar_06_altsheler_128kb.mp3

aniroo · Post by **aniroo** » March 4th, 2018, 8:32 pm

I'd be glad to DPL if you are still looking for one.

aniroo

Post by **MaryAnnSpiegel** » March 4th, 2018, 9:39 pm

Great aniroo. I'll add you to the MW.
MaryAnn

Edmonds · Post by **Edmonds** » March 4th, 2018, 9:59 pm

THANK YOU SO MUCH, ANIROO. I hope you enjoy my reading.