COMPLETE [Weekly Poem] I Have a Rendezvous with Death by Alan Seeger - dl
Sorry,
Here's the correction. I wish I could have a second chance and have it PLed again. Tried to remove the echoes!
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_br_128kb.mp3 at 1.13
Thank you ,
Brianna
Here's the correction. I wish I could have a second chance and have it PLed again. Tried to remove the echoes!
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_br_128kb.mp3 at 1.13
Thank you ,
Brianna
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Thank you Peter.
Thanks for the edit Brianna, the second reading is much clearer.
However, it sounds like you are too close to the mic, there are many breath noises on the p and s sounds.
You may wish to experiment with mic positions, as well as volume levels to try and improve the overall quality of the recordings.
*You should aim for your wave forms to peak near the 0.5 mark, like this:
ps... watch the beginning and ending silences, they should be less than 1 second and 5 seconds respectively.
Thanks for the edit Brianna, the second reading is much clearer.
However, it sounds like you are too close to the mic, there are many breath noises on the p and s sounds.
You may wish to experiment with mic positions, as well as volume levels to try and improve the overall quality of the recordings.
*You should aim for your wave forms to peak near the 0.5 mark, like this:
ps... watch the beginning and ending silences, they should be less than 1 second and 5 seconds respectively.
David Lawrence
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thank you for your patience and tips. what a shame to have the poem chosen and not be able to be in the MB!aradlaw wrote: ↑February 5th, 2018, 11:31 am Thank you Peter.
Thanks for the edit Brianna, the second reading is much clearer.
However, it sounds like you are too close to the mic, there are many breath noises on the p and s sounds.
You may wish to experiment with mic positions, as well as volume levels to try and improve the overall quality of the recordings.
*You should aim for your wave forms to peak near the 0.5 mark, like this:
ps... watch the beginning and ending silences, they should be less than 1 second and 5 seconds respectively.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous-seeger-br-128kb.mp3
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Brianna, thank you for suggesting this Weekly Poem, and yes, you ARE in the MW with your second file.
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Here's mine at 2:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_bk_128kb.mp3
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Bruce.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_bk_128kb.mp3
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Bruce.
Hi David,
Here's my recording:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_raj_128kb.mp3
Length: 1:41
Thanks, Raj.
Here's my recording:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_raj_128kb.mp3
Length: 1:41
Thanks, Raj.
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Cheers, Raj.
Cheers, Raj.
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Thank you Bruce and Raj.
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This was a very nice choice, Brianna.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_el_128kb.mp3 (1.54)
Erin
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_el_128kb.mp3 (1.54)
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Thank you Erin.
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Here is my reading, could someone please PL?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_dl_128kb.mp3
1:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rendezvous_seeger_dl_128kb.mp3
1:29
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Your reading is PL OK, David!
tovarisch
- reality prompts me to scale down my reading, sorry to say
to PLers: do correct my pronunciation please
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Thanks for listening tovarisch.
David Lawrence
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