[COMPLETE] REBELLION by Joseph M. Patterson -- icequeen

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » February 26th, 2018, 6:53 pm

Here's 9.

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 1st, 2018, 8:45 pm

And 10.

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 2nd, 2018, 8:17 pm

The cast of characters keeps growing. Here's 11.

Post by **icequeen** » March 4th, 2018, 10:36 pm

I'm wondering how all these people are coming together in the story, I guess I will have to keep listening to find out! Chapters 9-11 are PL OK!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 6th, 2018, 2:58 pm

Here are 12 & 13.

I can't imagine how it happened when the book was written, but I believe Ch. 12 was incorrectly titled. After listening, please let me know whether you agree. I would love to change it but know that's verboten. What I would do if you think it would be OK is to put in the Summary something like: Chapter 12 should have been titled "Al's Sister". Or am I missing something?

Post by **icequeen** » March 7th, 2018, 10:09 pm

I don't know, it seems odd to call it Moxey's sister when this was Al. But, we have to keep it the way it is. If you want, you can put something in the summary, but I think the less said the better. The listener may not even notice it. Chapters 12 and 13 are PL OK!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 9th, 2018, 6:55 am

Thanks. Good advice, Ann. We'll let Moxey keep his sister.

Here's 14.

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 12th, 2018, 4:23 am

Here's 15.

Post by **icequeen** » March 12th, 2018, 8:15 pm

Oh boy, the choice has been made! Chapters 14 and 15 are PL OK!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 13th, 2018, 4:39 pm

You think?? So did I.

Anyway, back to my problem with the chapter titles: I seriously doubt the author wrote them. “Georgia Leaves Home”. Really?

Chapter 16.

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 14th, 2018, 3:22 pm

Here's 17, and using my extraordinary

math skills, have calculated that this finishes the first half of the book.

Post by **icequeen** » March 14th, 2018, 8:08 pm

Chapters 16 and 17 are PL OK!

I found the scans of Rebellion on Archive, and the chapters are titled the same way as on PG. Maybe someone making edits, who did not actually read the book, made the chapter titles. Just a thought.

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 20th, 2018, 5:49 am

Here's 18. A bit of a narrating challenge, this one.

Post by **icequeen** » March 21st, 2018, 8:35 pm

Poor Georgia! Chapter 18 is PL OK!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » March 22nd, 2018, 3:17 pm

19 & 20 are ready, Ann.