COMPLETE [Weekly Poem] The Moon To The Sun by Alice Meynell - dl

Post by **aradlaw** » January 30th, 2018, 9:12 pm

Welcome to LIbriVox Raj, good first reading

You do have a few repeats in your reading, possible corrections you did not edit out ?
The last two lines in the first stanza; the first two lines in the second stanza; and the last two lines of the third stanza.
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boilingforest · Post by **boilingforest** » January 30th, 2018, 9:40 pm

Got it cleaned up and re-uploaded!

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_vw_128kb.mp3

Length is now 0:56

Jude1972 · Post by **Jude1972** » January 31st, 2018, 8:30 am

here's mine:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_jh_128kb.mp3 (01:11)

Post by **aradlaw** » January 31st, 2018, 9:21 am

Thank you Victoria, excellent edits, now PL OK.

Thank you Jude.

sannasoup · Post by **sannasoup** » January 31st, 2018, 3:25 pm

Here's my reading! 1:24

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_sa_128kb.mp3

Post by **aradlaw** » January 31st, 2018, 3:34 pm

Thank you Sanna.

RajVO · Post by **RajVO** » February 1st, 2018, 1:04 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑January 30th, 2018, 9:12 pm Welcome to LIbriVox Raj,

Thanks David, for the feedback.
I repeated some lines knowingly, to give some emphasis.
It may be an effect of my acting background.

Anyway, I removed the repetitions in my new recording here:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_raj_128kb.mp3
length: 0:58
Also removed the additional '.mp3' in filename.
My catalog name can be RajVO. As you may guess VO is for Voice Over.
Thanks again.

Post by **aradlaw** » February 1st, 2018, 6:22 am

Thank you for the edits Raj.

Post by **aradlaw** » February 1st, 2018, 7:54 am

Here is my reading, could someone please PL ?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_dl_128kb.mp3
1:08

MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » February 1st, 2018, 8:02 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑February 1st, 2018, 7:54 am Here is my reading, could someone please PL ?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_dl_128kb.mp3
1:08

PL OK!

Post by **aradlaw** » February 1st, 2018, 8:17 am

Thanks Kristin.

RajVO · Post by **RajVO** » February 1st, 2018, 11:04 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑February 1st, 2018, 6:22 am Thank you for the edits Raj.

Appreciate your prompt reply.

RajVO · Post by **RajVO** » February 1st, 2018, 11:06 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑February 1st, 2018, 7:54 am Here is my reading, could someone please PL ?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_dl_128kb.mp3
1:08

Liked the way, you read the ending disclaimer also in a poetic tone!

Jude1972 · Post by **Jude1972** » February 2nd, 2018, 4:29 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑January 31st, 2018, 9:21 am Thank you Victoria, excellent edits, now PL OK.

Thank you Jude.

excellent!!! have a good weekend people.....

brucek · Post by **brucek** » February 2nd, 2018, 7:30 am

Here's mine at 1:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/moonsun_meynell_bk_128kb.mp3

~~~~
Bruce.