Kitty wrote: ↑April 16th, 2018, 2:22 am
All right, I had some time to listen to Act 1 now. Technically all sounds well, the spaces are well placed, the sound is good. Excellent editing job there
I am a bit puzzled by the plot though, I don't get at all why Arthur is behaving so madly and raving
Well, he has only just realized that he loves Constance, only to immediately discover that she's engaged to that awful cad, Waterfield.
I mean, that's enough to drive any man mad, am I right?
Well, I have a few minor notes:
> at 0:17: you did not mention “Dramatis Personae” at the beginning of the voice credits, but I suppose it’s optional
I wasn't quite sure how to handle that, because there is no Dramatis Personae or character list of any kind in the text we have. It just begins straight in with the action. So, since there wasn't a "Dramatis Personae" in the text, I didn't ask Raj to say one.
> at 12:48: Col. G. He may have been out in the morning (aside).— either you mention “Col. Gervaise, aside” before the sentence or you leave it out altogether, but putting it behind the sentence doesn’t really make sense
I wasn't sure if that would work or not. Again, blame it on the text, which has the "aside" after the sentence. Anyway, I've fixed it.
> at 45:55: “I will not.” – sentence repeated, maybe you only wanted to leave the more insistent version in ?
Whoops, I didn't read carefully enough. I actually thought that line was supposed to be repeated! Fixed!
Apart from that, only the missing voice credit for the final streetboy, which hopefully will come in soon.
Sonia
Got it! Act 1 should be completely ready now!