[Solo]The Ring and the Book - An Interpretation - dlo
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Notes for your consideration:
1.29-1.32, p. 79, second line, extra word
...and why should it [not] be surprised at the end?
8.32-8.37, indented quotation p. 83, extra word + inversion
…[and] it seemed to say for the first time
'But am not I [heard I not] the Bride...
11.37-11.39, p. 85, end of main paragraph
"proper for [heard to] us travellers."
21.03-21.05, first half p. 91
...left o' the very ledge [heard edge] of things,
22.08-22.10, bottom third p. 91
From what just [heard just what] is to absolute nothingness-
22.39-22.43, p. 92, fourth line of indented quotation, extra word
That mops and mows and makes as [if] it were love
44.22-44.26, p. 106 indented quotation
...would personate [heard impersonate] Saint George
For a mock Princess in undragoned days.
Erin
1.29-1.32, p. 79, second line, extra word
...and why should it [not] be surprised at the end?
8.32-8.37, indented quotation p. 83, extra word + inversion
…[and] it seemed to say for the first time
'But am not I [heard I not] the Bride...
11.37-11.39, p. 85, end of main paragraph
"proper for [heard to] us travellers."
21.03-21.05, first half p. 91
...left o' the very ledge [heard edge] of things,
22.08-22.10, bottom third p. 91
From what just [heard just what] is to absolute nothingness-
22.39-22.43, p. 92, fourth line of indented quotation, extra word
That mops and mows and makes as [if] it were love
44.22-44.26, p. 106 indented quotation
...would personate [heard impersonate] Saint George
For a mock Princess in undragoned days.
Erin
Thanks Erin
Corrected file uploaded.
Duration now 44:57
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Corrected file uploaded.
Duration now 44:57
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Here is Chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_08_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:35
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https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_08_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:35
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Hi Algy,
Two notes for 08:
29.58-30.00. P. 125, end of penultimate indented quotation, extra word
...not [to] go doomed
And done with...
33.47-33.50. P. 128, top half of main paragraph, repetition
...she was resi she was resigned to suffering and death.
Two notes for 08:
29.58-30.00. P. 125, end of penultimate indented quotation, extra word
...not [to] go doomed
And done with...
33.47-33.50. P. 128, top half of main paragraph, repetition
...she was resi she was resigned to suffering and death.
Thanks Erin
Section 8 corrected and reuploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_08_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:34
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Section 8 corrected and reuploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_08_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:34
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A general notice: I'll be on the move at the very end of this month and the beginning of August. It's only for a few days, but thought I'd mention it. Carry on!
Two more chapters for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_09_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
16:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_10_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
17:16
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https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_09_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
16:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_10_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
17:16
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Hi Algy,
Two notes apiece for 9 and 10.
Section 9
13.01-13.03, third line on p. 139
With sour-sweet [heard sweet-sour] sauce...
14.59-15.01, p. 140, third line of indented quotation, extra word
...of all [the] days i' the year...
Section 10
3.09-3.12, p. 143, top half of second indented quotation
...shall not she [heard she not] jar the hand
That buffets her?
9.40-9.43, top half p. 147
I have had just [heard just had] the pitifullest dream
Two notes apiece for 9 and 10.
Section 9
13.01-13.03, third line on p. 139
With sour-sweet [heard sweet-sour] sauce...
14.59-15.01, p. 140, third line of indented quotation, extra word
...of all [the] days i' the year...
Section 10
3.09-3.12, p. 143, top half of second indented quotation
...shall not she [heard she not] jar the hand
That buffets her?
9.40-9.43, top half p. 147
I have had just [heard just had] the pitifullest dream
Thanks Erin
Sections 9 and 10 have been corrected and reuploaded.
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Sections 9 and 10 have been corrected and reuploaded.
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Section 11 is up.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_11_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:39.
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https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_11_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:39.
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Hi Algy,
A couple of notes for 11:
1.48-1.51, second and third lines of first indented quotation p. 153
Once [heard One] more appeal is made
From man's assize to mine...
21.23, first indented quotation p. 164, omission
…[and] an infant-heir to cheat?
22.06-22.08, bottom half p. 164
"where are the Christians in their panoply?"
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/panoply
22.21-22.24, first line of second indented quotation p. 164
Done at an instinct [heard instant] of the natural man.
A couple of notes for 11:
1.48-1.51, second and third lines of first indented quotation p. 153
Once [heard One] more appeal is made
From man's assize to mine...
21.23, first indented quotation p. 164, omission
…[and] an infant-heir to cheat?
22.06-22.08, bottom half p. 164
"where are the Christians in their panoply?"
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/panoply
22.21-22.24, first line of second indented quotation p. 164
Done at an instinct [heard instant] of the natural man.
Section 11 corrected and reuploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_11_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:42
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https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ringandbookinterpretation_11_hornbrooke_128kb.mp3
36:42
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