COMPLETE : The Mikado Jewel, by Fergus Hume -jo

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PL notes for:

sect 14 Xiv. The Jewel

1-Check for repeated sentence:13:10- 13:32 "This gem belonged to my ancestor, and it is only fair that I should possess it." Patricia could not approve of this speech, as she knew from Colpster's own lips that Sir Bevis had given it to Queen Elizabeth..

2-Check for repeated sentence 16:50 "Consider, Mr. Colpster! How could the thief have sent the jewel to you unless he knew more about the matter than we think? If an ordinary tramp stole it, he would have pawned it; if a priest of the temple took it, he would have carried it, as Mr. Theodore suggested, back to Japan.

Just a little editing needed.
Helen

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5/4/66 (S.V.) Malone, Jimmy M.
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sect 15 Xv. Pentreddle's Story
sect 16 Xvi. Lovers

PL OK :thumbs:
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14 edited and re-upped into MW; final chapters have also been uploaded. Thanks!
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sect 14 Xiv. The Jewel

spot PL OK :thumbs:
Helen

POW/MIA, we will remember them.
5/4/66 (S.V.) Malone, Jimmy M.
Private U.S. Army, 1st Battalion, 503rd Infantry
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PL OK for:

sect 17 Xvii. Trouble
sect 18 Xviii. Pleasure
sect 19 Xix. The Truth
sect 20 Xx. A Further Explanation

This was an engaging story. It has been my honor to be your DPL.
I wish you many more successful projects. :clap:
Helen

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5/4/66 (S.V.) Malone, Jimmy M.
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Post by VfkaBT »

Thanks for your help, Helen.

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working on it...:)
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Post by knotyouraveragejo »

Congratulations, Matt on completion of this solo recording for LibriVox. This book is now in the LibriVox catalog and available for listeners to download. Please check the catalog page and let me know if any changes are needed.

https://librivox.org/the-mikado-jewel-by-fergus-hume/
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