COMPLETE The life and adventures of Michael Armstrong -rap
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What a great start!
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What a great start!
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Section 0 and 4 PL OK
Yes, It is becoming clear, this is going to have some sad parts.
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Yes, It is becoming clear, this is going to have some sad parts.
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Section 4, 5 and 6 PL OK
You have been busy!
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You have been busy!
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We have a heroine!
I liked that you divided chapter 10 - to keep any chapter from being much longer than the others.
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We have a heroine!
I liked that you divided chapter 10 - to keep any chapter from being much longer than the others.
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Section 13 PL note - On short repeat at about 13:53 "Money murmurred the .. Money murmurred..."
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Section 13 PL note - On short repeat at about 13:53 "Money murmurred the .. Money murmurred..."
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All just lovely , but so distressing
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Sections 13, 14, 15, 16 PL OK
All just lovely , but so distressing
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perfect! I am fast?, you are prolific.
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perfect! I am fast?, you are prolific.
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