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Fafhrd wrote:Hello,

Please find section 04, "The Storyteller", here:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_04_middleton_128kb.mp3

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One little thing, how long is the recording (mm.ss)? Please remember to always post the duration of a recording when you post a link so that i can fill in the magic window :) thank you!
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Hello,

Please find section 5, "Admirals All", here:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_05_middleton_128kb.mp3.

It is 08:23 in length.

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If no one has requested them, I would like to claim sections 6 and 11.

thanks

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thank you :)
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Fafhrd wrote:Hello,

Please find section 5, "Admirals All", here:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_05_middleton_128kb.mp3.

It is 08:23 in length.

Thanks

Fafhrd
Hi Fafhrd,

Here are your notes:

Section 4:

4:20: "It is idle to expect a child to believe that every grown-up person was a child once upon a time, for it is not credible that they could have forgotten so much." is missing
8:40: This isn't the last section, so you don't need "End of The Day before Yesterday, by Richard Middleton."

Section 5:

8:14: This isn't the last section, so you don't need "End of The Day before Yesterday, by Richard Middleton."
8:16: Ending silence is too long. You should aim for 5 seconds, and you have about 6.8 seconds.
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Jordan

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Thank you jordan!
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Section 7. Children and the Spring
Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_07_middleton_128kb.mp3
Duration: 7:50

I hope it is all correct and ready to go. Please, tell me if I should alter anything)))
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Thank you :thumbs:
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Can I also read section 19. On Going to Bed?
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Thank you :thumbs:
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JuliaMikheeva wrote:Section 7. Children and the Spring
Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_07_middleton_128kb.mp3
Duration: 7:50

I hope it is all correct and ready to go. Please, tell me if I should alter anything)))
PL OK!
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thank you!
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JorWat wrote:
Fafhrd wrote:Hello,

Please find section 5, "Admirals All", here:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_05_middleton_128kb.mp3.

It is 08:23 in length.

Thanks

Fafhrd
Hi Fafhrd,

Here are your notes:

Section 4:

4:20: "It is idle to expect a child to believe that every grown-up person was a child once upon a time, for it is not credible that they could have forgotten so much." is missing
8:40: This isn't the last section, so you don't need "End of The Day before Yesterday, by Richard Middleton."

Section 5:

8:14: This isn't the last section, so you don't need "End of The Day before Yesterday, by Richard Middleton."
8:16: Ending silence is too long. You should aim for 5 seconds, and you have about 6.8 seconds.

JorWat, Thank you for taking the time to listen and find the mistakes!

I have corrected (hopefully) and the updated files are here:
Section 4, "The Storyteller": https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_04_middleton_128kb.mp3. It is 8 min 17.5 sec in length.
Section 5, "Admirals All": https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/daybeforeyesterday_05_middleton_128kb.mp3. It is 8 min 16.5 sec in length.

Thanks,
Fafhrd :)
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Thank you :thumbs:
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