Comp.: The Complete Works of Artemus Ward Part 2, War - lt

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DrPGould
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Post by DrPGould » October 27th, 2017, 8:54 am

Delmar:

Sections 1, 5, and 7 are PL-OK! Well done!

Section 6 is Purt-neer okey dokey but needs correckifcation:

AT 2:11 the phrase He ay have heard the skylark.....Patty sing is omitted
At 3:32 "I hadn't no sooner sot down" is repeated at 3:38.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Delmar H Dolbier » October 28th, 2017, 3:55 pm

Section 6 fixed: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/artemuswardpart2war_06_browne_128kb.mp3 [11:46]

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Post by DrPGould » October 28th, 2017, 6:01 pm

Delmar:

Section 6 is PL-OK! Nicely fixed!

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Delmar H Dolbier » October 29th, 2017, 5:36 pm

Phillip, thanks for checking me so carefully. This ain't the easiest text in the world to read!

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Post by DrPGould » October 29th, 2017, 5:38 pm

No problem, Delmar! You're doing very well!

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Delmar H Dolbier » October 29th, 2017, 6:45 pm

Section Eight (Chapters 8) https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/artemuswardpart2war_08_browne_128kb.mp3 [10:02]
Section Nine (Chapter 9 & 10) https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/artemuswardpart2war_09_browne_128kb.mp3 [09:29]

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Post by DrPGould » October 30th, 2017, 1:41 pm

Delmar:

Two little things....

(1) In Section 8 at 5:12 the word "find" is repeated at 5:13.

(2) In Section 9 the silence at the end is too long by 11 seconds.

Other than that, another excellent reading.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Delmar H Dolbier » October 30th, 2017, 8:35 pm


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Post by DrPGould » October 31st, 2017, 9:15 am

Delmar:

Everything is PL-OK except for Chapter 10 (and that's just one little thing)

At 9:39 the phrase "he says the colored" cuts out and is begun again at 9:46.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Delmar H Dolbier » October 31st, 2017, 6:09 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/artemuswardpart2war_10_browne_128kb.mp3 [13:51]

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Post by DrPGould » October 31st, 2017, 6:53 pm

You're done, Delmar! Section 10 is PL OK!
:clap: :clap: :clap:

I enjoyed listening to this project! Thanks for letting me be a part of it.

Philip
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Post by Lynnet » November 2nd, 2017, 5:50 pm

Delmar, is this ready for the catalog?
Help us finish:

Charles the Bold 7 sections remaining
Castle of Twilight 5 sections remaining
The Religious Experience of the Roman People 2 sections remaining
A Broken Bond 2 sections remaining

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Post by Delmar H Dolbier » January 17th, 2018, 10:24 pm

Sorry I missed that last message - not paying attention. Yes, the work is ready for catalog.

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Post by Lynnet » January 18th, 2018, 8:38 am

Help us finish:

Charles the Bold 7 sections remaining
Castle of Twilight 5 sections remaining
The Religious Experience of the Roman People 2 sections remaining
A Broken Bond 2 sections remaining

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Post by annise » January 18th, 2018, 6:20 pm

A couple of things about the summary - he died in Southampton (there's a "u " missing and the real "namesake" was called Artemos Ward - with an O not U ( there's actually a cartoon around of Artemus standing beside a statue of Artemos saying something like "I know I'm Artemus and you're Artemos but I'm standing here till some puts up a statue of me" :D

Anne

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